So much fun. I can see it got sidelined, but still, so much fun. Thanks for sharing it. :)
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Was that squee too loud? I think my neighbors heard it. *grins* Awesome!
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I actually was reading this the other day and looking to see if I still had notes on it. I'm rereading all my Marvel fanfic (both wholly mine and collaborative) and making notes. You get to hear it first... I'm gonna be borrowing hot moms from across my multiverse to use in Westchester Hold 'Em.
Cordy as the Felcia Hardy, the Black Cat? This should be a PURRRFFFEECCTTTLLLYYYY interesting story. *Sorry about the cat pun, but it wors so well with this tale!*
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I love this one. Well, I love most of your stories. I'm a fan.
Your Cordy and her friends are hysterical. Kelsey's a riot. A real pervert but it's not as if she's subtle about it which makes it all the more funny. None of these girls are anything but blunt, straight forward and funny anyway. That's part of their charm. That and they make their own mind about what they want. No guilt. No shame. No justification. I love it.
I'm glad you don't give a damn either about PC. Feel free to make me (us) laugh with whatever your imagination is coming with.
Thanks for another great read..even if it's WIP. It could end there anyway.
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Kelsey's a real person, albeit legally blind instead of blind-blind. She's actually used the "blind people see with their hands" line on a few girls and gotten as far as the collarbone before the girl catches on.
More reviews! Lord, I've got far too much free time on vacations if I have the time to re-read and review all these stories. So, it's an interesting story. I don't see how it could tie in with New Day Dawning, but it's still good. I don't care if the Scoobies don't appear - it's a Cordelia-centered story, so who cares? Although if you want a real villain, you can decide to believe Willow's accusations of Giles holding her back from magic, and have Willow, the Wicked Witch of the West. There's not much to day, actually. There hasn't been much plot so far other than the romance. The characters are interesting, but aside from Kelsey who rocks, we haven't seen enough of them to really tell. One criticism: Cordelia's a bitch. Really, she won't hook up with Anna because Anna's 'white trash'? If it was 'I hate Anna, I'm not lesbian/bi, I love Kelsey' it would have been better... but the way it is, Cordelia's just a bitch. Even if she decides she wants Kelsey, there's nothing wrong (at least in stories) in being polygamous. I hope she had a paradigm shift, and starts being nicer. And if not, maybe Anna can attack Cordelia, or Kelsey out of jealousy to snap her out of it. Well, I hope you update this, but like I said regarding the last story I reviewed, since there's not much plot yet, I'm more concerned about Run This Town, Holly's story, New Day Dawning, Blue Belle, West Coast Avengers, HP and the Wand of Uru, What If I Stumble, HP and the Shell of the God-King, Seductive and Ultimate Arachnia (what's sadder - that I follow so many of your stories despite some of them not being updated in years, or that you haven't updated them in years?). So that's that. Hope to see another chapter for any of the stories I mentioned soon, until then, Meneldur.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Harmony as Emma Forst? Shudder.. I would have the girls dress up as DC superheroes. Cordelia as Wonder Woman, Harmony as Super Girl, and the other two would be Starfire and Raven from Teen Titans.
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Yeah, that sorta defeats the purple of a Marvel YAHF then, doesn't it?
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