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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I vote for more!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [7 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
This is a good idea for a story. I think the Smith surname is 'plain jane' overkill, you could have gone with Browning or Smithers and have your character make a joke about it at least not being Brown or Smith. What is Mary Smith Winchester now, a benevolent ghost?
Comments from author:
I don't really like the last name either, and I was trying to think of one and I saw that the actress who played Mary Winchester had the last name Smith, so I took it.

And I'm keeping her death and everything after it canon. I'm sure you've seen the episode "Home"? If not, then yes, just think of Mary as a benevolent ghost.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from heathenseyes
Review:
Interesting. Can't wait to see some more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope to have more soon!
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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