I'm so glad you've decided to update this story, as its got one of the more interesting pairings. I particularly like how you've evolved the main characters (Percy and Millicent), although the UST seems a little extended. I look forward to the following chapters. Great job!
Review By [kcl] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When the Sand Runs Out" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapters.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot soup::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When the Sand Runs Out" from ladyknight
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Oh I'm so glad you updated! I absolutely love this story. Percy and Fred's conversation was very touching, I hope things will work out for him and Millicent. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [ladyknight] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dream of the Everyday Housewife" from wonderbe
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This is a very interesting fic here, and really liked how you have utilized one of the lesser characters, Millie Bulstrode, and have brought her into her own. Here's to Penny having her spite and venom come back on her later.
Review By [wonderbe] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dream of the Everyday Housewife" from isuelt
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this is great. i love the look into millicent since she doesn't really get much play & i can't wait for more.
Review of chapter "Dream of the Everyday Housewife" from Dragonelf
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I am already looking forward to read the next chapter.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dream of the Everyday Housewife" from Rhyssia
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Huh. I wonder how I missed this earlier. *grin*
Is.. rather poigant and heartbreaking in turns, but very lovely regardless.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
I really like the idea of Percy and "Millie" being friends. She could definely understand his ambition, and they could both use someone to support the other.
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