Very good story. I liked a whole lot of it, and I only had a few real problems with it.

1. The quotes that you took from "Empty Places" - I've said it before, and I'll say it again. Pretty much every character in that episode was way out of character. No less so in your fic.

2. You allowed the fic to dribble off at the end, rather than end on a firm note. Even if you're planning a sequel, it was a weakness.

3. Please, please, please. Get yourself a dictionary and thesaurus and use them! Your misuse of certain words, and spelling others as homophones was a distraction all through your fic.

As I said, other than those issues, the fic was very well done. Good job.

A bit long for a story, but very good. Looking forward to the sequel.

Nice one :)

wow I gotta say you did a bloody good job in this chapter! The ending threw me for a loop! Here I was thinking she was gonna end up being Sirius and Joyce's daughter and then you drop this bomb at the end!

Oh my Glory and Moldyshorts in one go huh.. Great job on this long long fic, could not nor did i want to stop reading you did an excellent job. Can't wait to read more!

Wow, this was an incredible story, a great balance of action, comedy, angst, and drama. I'm not usually a fan of Buffy/Harry pairings, but I really like how you handled the relationship here. Very sweet, and very natural. And speaking of relationships, I liked how you handled the relationships between Buffy and everyone else. The new friends that she made, the changing relationships between old friends, and I loved the relationship between Buffy and the professors. Especially Dumbledore. I was soooo happy that he didn't die!

I love how you weaved the two mythologies together, and made it work so well. The entire plot was fantastic, tightly woven and creative. I also liked the pace of the story as well. It's an incredibly long work, and I was a bit intimidated by the word count, but when I started reading, it totally didn't feel that long at all. In fact, I read most of this in one sitting, cause I couldn't wait to find out what was next.

I really enjoyed your Buffy. IMO, with a lesser author, this could have turned into a Mary-sue mess. But even if she is now a god (which I think is just fantastic), you kept her human and vulnerable. That takes quite a bit of talent. I love reading about powerful/leader Buffy, and this was her at her best.

And before I wind up this long ass review, I just want to say that I also really enjoyed Sweetheart and Anjo. (I totally didn't see the Darla twist coming, but I loved it.)

Thanks for writing this story, and I see that you've started a sequel. I can't wait to read more about this world!

I loved the whole story, the plot, the character develpment, everything. The dream in the last chapter was an interesting twist. I say keep writting.

This was a wonderful story, I just reread it and I fell in love with it all over again.

I love the building, back ground tension and mystery of Buffy's mysterious shakes. When I first heard of it, that it happens around magic, it made me think that maybe her body wants to absorb and suck away magic. Are the shakes because she refuses to do so, if this is the case?


Great chapter. Loving this story!

Super Buffy-*grin* She is three in one.



I really like this story.

I am really enjoying this story again. I can't remember why I stopped reading it at chapter 15, but I'm glad I refound it.

I enjoyed the dramatic apparation at the end.

Damn, that was dismal. Excellent writing so far. Very evocative, even in its vagueness.

It's only the beginning wait till you ge to the good parts :)

Well, I have to say I have no idea what's going on at all, but I'm definitely curious. And I stopped watching Buffy regularly after the fifth season. Joss and the rest lost their minds and it was enough dealing with the emotional trainwreck that was ANGEL without subjecting myself to what was going on in Sunnydale, as well. Bastards, doing such horrible things in so compelling a way. I couldn't look away, damn them.

Wow! Over the past few weeks, I've slowly but surely been reading on my pda this story. You've done a wonderful job weaving this verse together and I hope you'll someday write a future-fic in the verse...even if it's just a vingette.

I actually wrote a sequel its posted as Allegiance, you should check it out!

This story is a work of magic! It’s just awesome! Great work!

Wow! Thank you! That's so sweet :)