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hehe poor golden trio....:)

11. Chapter Ten

Oz is there now? Interesting.

6.

nice scene with the Unicorn and later with Ginny
Uncle Albus...hmmmmm...

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nice part with Draco and a jealous Harry...how sweet :)


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a civilized talk with Draco...how strange....

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good she wrote them and that Willow replied, but you really should tell us what happened soon.
This is getting frustrating :)
and if that scene in the forest wasn't a scouting mission......

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hm quite confusing so far.

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looks like Harry is really down...understandable....


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a bit of interest between Harry and Buffy.....still a bit confusing not knowing where you come from Buffy's
side

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hmm making friends with Neville? nice....

its good story but you need to rename your art archive its the same name makes it hard to download for viewing later at work like i like to do keep up the good work

That was absolutely the best btvs/harry potter crossover I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us mortals.

You did a good job with this story.

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I...have no idea what is going on here at all. It seems like you are starting your story somewhere after the beginning. I am assuming later chapters will explain some things in flashback but the start was just way to ambiguous. Any good story needs a beginning, middle, climax and an end. Starting a story somewhere in the middle and backing up with flashbacks is a stylistic technique that can work but the beginning scene needs to be a strong one that grabs a readers attention and makes them want to continue to see just what the heck is going on. I hate to say it but your beginning chapter is extremely weak in that regard. There was no conflict or even enticing plot elements to catch my attention. I'll give this story a few more chapters to see if it tightens up any, but this really was a pretty anemic start to a story. I hate to seem so harsh but I really do mean this critique in a constructive manner. I am definitely not spending my time writing a review just to be spiteful.

Very good story. I liked a whole lot of it, and I only had a few real problems with it.

1. The quotes that you took from "Empty Places" - I've said it before, and I'll say it again. Pretty much every character in that episode was way out of character. No less so in your fic.

2. You allowed the fic to dribble off at the end, rather than end on a firm note. Even if you're planning a sequel, it was a weakness.

3. Please, please, please. Get yourself a dictionary and thesaurus and use them! Your misuse of certain words, and spelling others as homophones was a distraction all through your fic.

As I said, other than those issues, the fic was very well done. Good job.

A bit long for a story, but very good. Looking forward to the sequel.

Nice one :)

wow I gotta say you did a bloody good job in this chapter! The ending threw me for a loop! Here I was thinking she was gonna end up being Sirius and Joyce's daughter and then you drop this bomb at the end!

Oh my Glory and Moldyshorts in one go huh.. Great job on this long long fic, could not nor did i want to stop reading you did an excellent job. Can't wait to read more!

Wow, this was an incredible story, a great balance of action, comedy, angst, and drama. I'm not usually a fan of Buffy/Harry pairings, but I really like how you handled the relationship here. Very sweet, and very natural. And speaking of relationships, I liked how you handled the relationships between Buffy and everyone else. The new friends that she made, the changing relationships between old friends, and I loved the relationship between Buffy and the professors. Especially Dumbledore. I was soooo happy that he didn't die!

I love how you weaved the two mythologies together, and made it work so well. The entire plot was fantastic, tightly woven and creative. I also liked the pace of the story as well. It's an incredibly long work, and I was a bit intimidated by the word count, but when I started reading, it totally didn't feel that long at all. In fact, I read most of this in one sitting, cause I couldn't wait to find out what was next.

I really enjoyed your Buffy. IMO, with a lesser author, this could have turned into a Mary-sue mess. But even if she is now a god (which I think is just fantastic), you kept her human and vulnerable. That takes quite a bit of talent. I love reading about powerful/leader Buffy, and this was her at her best.

And before I wind up this long ass review, I just want to say that I also really enjoyed Sweetheart and Anjo. (I totally didn't see the Darla twist coming, but I loved it.)

Thanks for writing this story, and I see that you've started a sequel. I can't wait to read more about this world!

I loved the whole story, the plot, the character develpment, everything. The dream in the last chapter was an interesting twist. I say keep writting.

This was a wonderful story, I just reread it and I fell in love with it all over again.