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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Please tell me your muse has not given up on this story! I would love to see how this story is going to play out!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [28 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Chapter 26 Review:

Goddamn Xander. Acting all high and might, like he has any right to throw stones at another's actions that have ended up hurting Buffy (or anyone else for that matter). He is constantly doing things that end up hurting others, but doesn't seem to have a problem with that.

I love the story, though. Even though Xander's behavior annoys me, you have captured the hypocritical aspect of his personality so well, that I can't help but appreciate that.

I just love this story, and I may or may not have reviewed this before (I will admit that I am pretty lazy in regards to logging in to review), but even though this is certainly not my first time reading the story, I find it just as enjoyable as when I first read it, possibly even more.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [3 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from starwolf
Review:
that was an excellent first effort. you took some things in interesting new directions and left promises of things to come. you story "unexpected" was a little smoother, but practice make perfect. thank you for sharing this with us.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [31 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
10.

hehe poor golden trio....:)

11. Chapter Ten

Oz is there now? Interesting.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
6.

nice scene with the Unicorn and later with Ginny
Uncle Albus...hmmmmm...

7.


nice part with Draco and a jealous Harry...how sweet :)


8.

a civilized talk with Draco...how strange....

9.

good she wrote them and that Willow replied, but you really should tell us what happened soon.
This is getting frustrating :)
and if that scene in the forest wasn't a scouting mission......
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
2.

hm quite confusing so far.

3.
looks like Harry is really down...understandable....


4.

a bit of interest between Harry and Buffy.....still a bit confusing not knowing where you come from Buffy's
side

5.

hmm making friends with Neville? nice....
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from jaeanna
Review:
its good story but you need to rename your art archive its the same name makes it hard to download for viewing later at work like i like to do keep up the good work
Review By [jaeanna] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from nomorebread
Review:
That was absolutely the best btvs/harry potter crossover I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us mortals.
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a good job with this story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sterling
Review:
I...have no idea what is going on here at all. It seems like you are starting your story somewhere after the beginning. I am assuming later chapters will explain some things in flashback but the start was just way to ambiguous. Any good story needs a beginning, middle, climax and an end. Starting a story somewhere in the middle and backing up with flashbacks is a stylistic technique that can work but the beginning scene needs to be a strong one that grabs a readers attention and makes them want to continue to see just what the heck is going on. I hate to say it but your beginning chapter is extremely weak in that regard. There was no conflict or even enticing plot elements to catch my attention. I'll give this story a few more chapters to see if it tightens up any, but this really was a pretty anemic start to a story. I hate to seem so harsh but I really do mean this critique in a constructive manner. I am definitely not spending my time writing a review just to be spiteful.
Review By [Sterling] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from (Recent Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
Very good story. I liked a whole lot of it, and I only had a few real problems with it.

1. The quotes that you took from "Empty Places" - I've said it before, and I'll say it again. Pretty much every character in that episode was way out of character. No less so in your fic.

2. You allowed the fic to dribble off at the end, rather than end on a firm note. Even if you're planning a sequel, it was a weakness.

3. Please, please, please. Get yourself a dictionary and thesaurus and use them! Your misuse of certain words, and spelling others as homophones was a distraction all through your fic.

As I said, other than those issues, the fic was very well done. Good job.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from winnie
Review:
A bit long for a story, but very good. Looking forward to the sequel.
Review By [winnie] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Ansku
Review:
Nice one :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
wow I gotta say you did a bloody good job in this chapter! The ending threw me for a loop! Here I was thinking she was gonna end up being Sirius and Joyce's daughter and then you drop this bomb at the end!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifty Nine" from Nessann
Review:
Oh my Glory and Moldyshorts in one go huh.. Great job on this long long fic, could not nor did i want to stop reading you did an excellent job. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Nessann] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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