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Review of chapter "Prologue" from Drow

Review:

I like the start. This has a lot of potential!

And now for the constructive criticism:

Anyone popping in out of nowhere (in Atlantis) would be assumed to be hostile.
A lot of gun pointing and distance would be maintained until they ascertained her intent.

I doubt that Buffy would make the mental jump to Atlantis (as in the lost city), she would probably make some quip about a cheesy nightclub or the deep south.

Review By [Drow] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from Claddagh

Review:

Interesting beginning. Looking forward to more.

Review By [Claddagh] • Date [6 Sep 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from manic

Review:

I look forward to seeing where this is headed.

Review By [manic] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from KnightWulf

Review:

interesing like the first chapter can't wait to see what you write for the next

Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Prologue" from AriaDragoncrest

Review:

good start.

Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from mithrilandtj

Review:

Cool!

Curious about the title though.

Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus

Review:

Intriguing beginning. I must admit I am having trouble imagining a retired SG1 sitting back and letting Shepard do things his way, but I really want to see you make it happen.

Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from spk

Review:

Definitely love the premise. Great start. Can't wait to read more. :)

Review By [spk] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]

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