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Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Really enjoying this so far! I was very sad when I came to the end of the wip!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Nita
Review:
At first, I was hating how Draco was being called J.J. but now that it's been explained i love the name.
Review By [Nita] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from phoenixfire
Review:
This story is great! I'm loving how you make Draco- sorry, JJ- into a 3D human being. I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before, but if I have I'll say this again: UPDATE SOON!!
Review By [phoenixfire] • Date [30 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from phoenixfire
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Woo! This is a great story! I love the idea and the complexity. Normally, I don't read Ginny/Draco, but it worked in this. Having Draco become J.J. Summers and practically be adopted by Spike was imaginative, and I really liked the break from the norm. I just can't wait till Spike's corporeal again! I love how they're all like family, as well. Please update!
Review By [phoenixfire] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice story so far and going to the last chapter maybe someone should tell JJ of Harry's own
upbringing. That could help his envy and maybe they could work on becoming friends (shudder,
what an idea).
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from misdom
Review:
I've read this story 3 times and I love it more each time. Please finish it!!!
Review By [misdom] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from VivianCaidin
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I do so hope you continue this story... it is one of my favorites.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from caissana
Review:
I know it's been several years since your last update.. but please, please, please don't abandon this story!!
Review By [caissana] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from VivianCaidin
Review:
Here's hoping you continue your story. Looking forward to what happens next.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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I haven't been following this story but I an now. nice development and really great flow with the dialog it seems very natural. love how they stoled angel's car and when is spike getting his body back????

*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from mokahi
Review:
Yep! Still love it!
Review By [mokahi] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Wow, I just reread this and I still love it! I'm seriously hoping that the Mystery Person you're pairing Dawn with is Connor! That would be so awesome! And the look on Angel's face when he meets Dawn's new boyfriend would be priceless! I also noticed that you added and authors note to the first chapter almost a year ago saying that the next chapter would be up within a couple days; you wouldn't believe how disappointed I was to get to the end of this and realize that it hadn't been updated yet! :-( Please, please, please update soon?

As for an explanation as to why the kids are going to high school, it will help them to hide in plain sight, help them blend in a bit more. If they didn't go to school, someone might notice and look at them more closely. Plus, I think that Buffy would want them to be around kids their own age and to have that little bit of normal. I hope that helps!

More soon, please? *gives you puppy dog eyes* Pretty, pretty please?

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Bluejello
Review:
*whimpers*
Few things are more jarring than suddenly coming to the end of what's been written for a story you're completely absorbed in.
I loved the first twenty chapters and hope there will still be more to come, this has been really interesting and well written!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Frogsareevil
Review:
Ok, i'm not sure this is relevant anymore, i only just read your post and it was posted way back in july, and by all means feel free to ignore this, but here is what i think:

They are going to a muggle school simply to get a muggle education. They can't go to a wizarding school, so they go to a muggle. Besides, it will help them broaden their understanding, from what i have read in the HP books, it seems to be on common agreement that muggles are idiots. But, clearly they (or alternatively we) are not. We have nuclear weapons (not exactly a yay point, but will still wipe out pretty much a whole city in a very short space of time, whilst wizards can only kill one person at a time - on the powerful kill-y weapons i think we win), we have an army, and cars, airplanes, mobile phones, the Internet (thank god), etc... In the end we have so much more than them and they need to know it. By teaching Draco about muggles you got him to be a normal angst-y teenager, the others need to follow suit. After all, all heroes need an education, even if they don't feel like or want it. And they need to get out of the way of the slayers/watchers/demon killing people/brooding vampires.

Also, amazing story, wonderful to hear you have decided to stop the abandoning, and just to be the annoying person (clears throat) 'UPDATE SOON'!!!!!!!
Review By [Frogsareevil] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from janine
Review:
How could I give this story anything other than a 10? I was going through the voting for The Crossing Over Awards and guess what... there was your story under Best Unfinished HP Crossover (so you know I just HAD to vote for you) and then I decided to reread the story. And while I've read it easily three times through it's still by far one of my favorite fanfiction stories. Imagine my delight when I read an update from 7/11/07 saying you've continued the story. I really hope you are able to update! I understand loosing steam and not knowing where to go with the story, but I really do hope you've continued to be as inspired as you were when you updated your authors note. I would LOVE to see an update to this story. Anywho, thanks for reading my little rant. Love the story!
Comments from author:
I had a period where I hadn't written anything more than a thousand words in over two years.

But I just won NaNoWriMo, and it inspired me to start working on all my unfinished stuff again.

I've picked this back up, and I'll start posting again in the new year.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad to know it's still being read.
Review By [janine] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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