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His Mistake

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Review of chapter "His Mistake" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool stuff here :)

Wait, what about the part where they're rushing Todd on a gurney through the hospital and the janitor sticks his head into the hallway and comments? 8D
Comments from author:
Thanks. I thought about doing that, but I figured I'd keep it short and sweet.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from MistofRainbows
Review:
ROFLMAO is about the best way to say that. Great short story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from (Past Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
Very funny idea, I loved it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from mymatedave
Review:
*smirk* 'The Todd' definitely made a mistake there.
Comments from author:
It had to happen sooner or later. :)
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from WhiteWolf
Review:
It is a good thing for Todd that there are three doctors in the house.
Comments from author:
Quite!
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from Arekanderu
Review:
Ouch.You know somehow i think even this won't discourage the Todd
Comments from author:
No. He'd probably try to get sympathy out of the nurses. ;)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from link
Review:
Hope Todd learn his lesson. Some woman take it literally. LOL.
Comments from author:
The only lesson he's learned is that sometimes women don't talk figuritively. I don't think anything could keep 'The Todd' down. :)
Review By [link] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from (Current Donor)Piperkat
Review:
Nothing to say but "heh". :) That was satisfying.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Piperkat] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from jezaeiri
Review:
This is bloody priceless!

Love it.
Great job.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Mistake" from Mcspender
Review:
This veery funny; the characters were ... well, in character=).
And Todd, poor poor Todd... messing with a former God-King it can be veery painful.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was hoping that it wasn't too much.

Quite. :)
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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