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Review of chapter "First Day" from AiNanashi
Review:
Fantastic
Review By [AiNanashi] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Tjin
Review:
ah ha... ummm... Hate to be a stickler again (No really this is a good fic and i like it.) But Xander lived in the upstairs bedroom until season four, after he got back from his road trip his parents had moved him into the basement and started charging rent.

other then that it's a great story and well worth reading.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Good job.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FelineFeral
Review:
I have no idea what the crossover is with but this still holds my interest. I'm looking forward to reading more. Good Job so far!
Review By [FelineFeral] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting idea and start. It is a little choppy even allowing for the short format.

Xander using Oz to get Willow to agree to dress up doesn't work, because he wasn't really a factor until after the bust was broken. If you are going off canon here please explain in an authors note or in the body of the story. Its not huge problem but it is jarring.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Interesting start.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Tjin
Review:
umm... you do know oz showed up after Halloween?

other then that (which i am sure you have probably heard a few thousand times by this point.) it's not a bad story, keep up the good work.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
It was a point I could use, call it artistic license
Review By [Tjin] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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