Review of chapter "First Day" from
BobbokyReview:
sweet
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [11 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from
TjinReview:
ah ha... ummm... Hate to be a stickler again (No really this is a good fic and i like it.) But Xander lived in the upstairs bedroom until season four, after he got back from his road trip his parents had moved him into the basement and started charging rent.
other then that it's a great story and well worth reading.
-Tjin
Review By [
Tjin] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from
BluesnowmanReview:
Good job.
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
FelineFeralReview:
I have no idea what the crossover is with but this still holds my interest. I'm looking forward to reading more. Good Job so far!
Review By [
FelineFeral] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
purrfusReview:
Interesting idea and start. It is a little choppy even allowing for the short format.
Xander using Oz to get Willow to agree to dress up doesn't work, because he wasn't really a factor until after the bust was broken. If you are going off canon here please explain in an authors note or in the body of the story. Its not huge problem but it is jarring.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
BluesnowmanReview:
Interesting start.
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
TjinReview:
umm... you do know oz showed up after Halloween?
other then that (which i am sure you have probably heard a few thousand times by this point.) it's not a bad story, keep up the good work.
-Tjin
Comments from author:
It was a point I could use, call it artistic license
Review By [
Tjin] • Date [8 Sep 07] • Not Rated
