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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar
Review:
What a great idea. Good job.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
Review:
Never let it be said that Ethan Rayne can't hold a grudge...
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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I'm glad to see that the second story of this series has been posted, because I'm intrigued as all hell. I really enjoyed this, thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GoldenRat
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Oookay, that ended rather abruptly.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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Intriguing! Any hope of a sequel, to pick up on what Buffy's side of that story might have looked like?
Comments from author:
Story two will be about the Summers family.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KevinSchultz
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Point of grammar: the following sentence:

“Ripper, you can't be serious,” Ethan Rayne was worried.

...is saying that his worrying literally caused the sentence "Ripper, you can't be serious" to be formed. This is unlikely; what I think you're trying to say is that Ethan was speaking and being worried at the same time. The chunk of sentence that immediately follows a quote and comma refers to how that quote was formed. Various correct forms would be:

Ethan Rayne was worried. "Ripper, you can't be serious."
"Ripper, you can't be serious," Ethan said, worried.
"Ripper, you can't be serious."

You use this style a couple of times - it's grammatically incorrect.
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rivrgrl
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usual the whole Ripper/Ethan thing is cringe worthy.. but you wrote it making it not so much.. and i love his revenge.. very very original.. especially in picking Buffy.. it was pure random on his part cuz he wouldn't know just what she would accomplish as a slayer.. but you said his little spell has reprocussions.. can't wait to find out what exactly they are. Did he send her to Abydos? if not what other planet? when will SG-1 come into play? to wrap it all up; when is the next story?
Comments from author:
The pairing of Ripper and Ethan generally squicks me out too. However, it *was* the mid-70s and experimentation was the order of the day. Combine that with drugs (hey, you just know they were doing something) and messing around with the dark arts, I can see it happening. Like Ethan said, Ripper was rebelling.

Buffy was chosen for two reasons. First unlike most of the other potentials, she was a Potential, and destined to be the Slayer. Second, the Council didn't know about her so when she went missing they had no reason to look for her so the trail had a chance to go stone cold. But you are right, Ethan had no idea what she was supposed to accomplish he just wanted to screw the Council.

Now as to where Ethan sent Buffy, not even he knows for sure and I'm not telling.

SG-1 is scheduled to appear in the fourth story. The next story will hopefully be out before the end of the month.
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Interesting idea. I'll be interested to see if you expand the series.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
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This is so Ethan. Not only the idea and execution, but the fact that it doesn't last. Poor guy.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
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Ethan's idea of revenge was so him. I loved his reaction to another slayer being called "Bloody hell, Ethan thought. How did the stupid chit manage to die so quickly? Oh well, it was fun while it lasted. Maybe a repeat is in order?".
Are you going to continue with this story line? I see it listed under series. I'll keep my fingers crossed.
Comments from author:
Yes there will be a continuation. The next story feature a very different perspective.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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