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serenityselenaReview:
interesting story :)
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serenityselena] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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elisethReview:
What a cute story. I like it :)
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eliseth] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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GundumMReview:
i like it
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GundumM] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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ShieldageReview:
Thank you, the story flows better this time through. Jim had his work cut out for him in the hurricane areas... I'm glad they had someone like him to help out. The 'casual' event is a good reason for him to be hit by Murphy's Law, and it's great that things are looking up. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing it again, and letting me know what you thought of it. I credited you on the fanfiction.net posting too... Tracey
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Shieldage] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ShieldageReview:
Huh, he didn't get invited to speak?
Buffy should do a good job for her portion, but - as far as dealing with costumed heroes goes - if not Jim, then who?
Comments from author:
I wanted to thank you for your comment - because of it, I revised this FFA and am reposting it, crediting you for reminding me to "note" the things you cited... Thanks for the perfect bit of constructive criticism, and I appreciate that you took the time to tell me what you thought of my work.
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Shieldage] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
