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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing and enjoyable story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The end, my only friend" from wswords
Review:
Started out decent, as in first 3 chapters, I might even go as far as to say good, but after that you dropped the , that was set for some very interesting character interaction, for some badly written action scenes. While I am not opposed to violence, actually quite a fan of it in fiction, but when you set a scene for a non-violent character struggle it is both bad writing and disappointing to have some poorly written, not to insult you, action scenes instead of what could have been a great story.

What you have written isn't necessarily bad, it is just not good enough to stand on its own without significant character development development around it. I might sound a bit harsh in this review, but that is only because I thought this could have been much better than it is.

First 3 chapter ~7/10.
Review By [wswords] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am SO slayed" from wswords
Review:
I always saw the Ghostbuster's uniforms were tan (as opposed to grey), but as a wise man once said "I'm colorblind what's your excuse?" Not colorblind, the question was to both of us.
Review By [wswords] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The end, my only friend" from Tanelorne
Review:
Good read,well written, only problem is its too short.
Comments from author:
Yeah well I added a bit and started the next story.
Review By [Tanelorne] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The end, my only friend" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Your story was sooooo over the top I loved it. After all: Me man. Me like things go boom! I actually would have liked your story to be longer as you really didn't fill out the characters much. But for a smash and bang story, you done good.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The end, my only friend" from eriktheviking
Review:
Wow, never an easy win. Great writing, thanks.
Comments from author:
Your welcome, I'm pretty sure I'm gonna do a sequel.

Also, I was trying to represent one of the major RE events. You know when you go into a room your attache case full of ammo and guns thinking "Ah this will be easy" and one battle later you have no ammo left and are swearing at your well everything in the room.

And thanks for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boss Battles Judge meets judgement and mayor" from phnxfyr
Review:
Can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thanks, I should have the next Chapter done soon.
Review By [phnxfyr] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Boss Battles Judge meets judgement and mayor" from missinglink
Review:
Nice job. Would be interested in the side stories on the behind closed doors action if you were inclined to write it. If not no prob, but would be nice. Kinda felt a little rushed between Judge and Mayor as his skills and take on things might have made for some interesting outcomes otherwise.

Going forward should be fun to see his take on Adam and the Initiative. Are there enough explosives for Glory or will it be like the show and pound her til she changes and finish Ben? The trio? Ha ha ha ha ha. Would be too funny just what if anything he might do to them. Me thinks Jono would just wet himself before risking Xan's wrath in this verse. Andrew might worship him more than Warren, and Warren, well Warren would be small potatoes.

On another note you could do the whole Willow bad aspect with Tara dying, but unless you are suddenly looking for a dark tone on this I would heed you to stay away from it. This feels light and fun as it currently is. To do that story would definately take it in a wholly different direction.

Best of luck on more if it is there and appreciate what all there has been so far. Thanks. Later.
Comments from author:
Ah you mean the planning and such. I may work on that at some point, I really want to make a sequel where Xander joins Chris and Sheva for RE5. I can just seem him having his fun.

I don't know, your not wrong, but remember Umbrella is just run by one person. A smart evil person is more dangerous than a hundred demons.

I'm thinking of doing it, but I'm not sure how to quite make it "positive" I mean we've seen the strength of friendship and love in the RE games, I'm not sure I could pull it off on that level though.

Thanks, and thanks for your review Ttrunks.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boss Battles Judge meets judgement and mayor" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great set of snapshots.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm trying to think up how to do Lone Xander against Glory, and the ideas are interesting. I should have this story finished hopefully by the end of the week.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boss Battles Judge meets judgement and mayor" from sunamee
Review:
I look forward to the next update. By the way, what happened to Willow?
Comments from author:
She's still around, I just figured she wouldn't be at the battle. Willow is relatively still a normal human at this point. Wessley, Joyce and Dawn were their but far away and all were skilled with guns. Faith was up close and personal but she had Slayer weapons.

Let's just say Buffy and Willow were helping protect the back of the class from the massive amount of vampires.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boss Battles Judge meets judgement and mayor" from Bluesnowman
Review:
pretty good
Comments from author:
Thanks, I was trying to make the mayor battle scene something like one of the "Button mash boss fights" in the game. I think I didn't do to bad. To this day the knife fight with Krauz ((Freaky arm blade guy, I can't remember his name and that might not be right)) is one of my favorite boss fights.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I love two women, and hate my life." from Bluesnowman
Review:
Pretty good stuff I can not wait for more.
Comments from author:
I've finished the story now, and can't wait to hear your views on it.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I love two women, and hate my life." from LFW
Review:
Joyce, Dawn and Willow; quite the nice place to be
Looking forward to more
Thanks
Comments from author:
Yup, and thanks, I finally just got an update posted.
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am SO slayed" from LFW
Review:
Great story
Buffy yelling is and impotent is funny
Joyce being happy is great
Joyce and Dawn is priceless
Thanks
Looking forward to mote
Comments from author:
Well you got it, hope this chap holds up to your expectations.
Review By [LFW] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "- + - = +?" from djhardim
Review:
I hadn't played the game or seen the movies(Resident Evil), so I wasn't familar with the character. In the future, please cite the crossover(s) in your disclaimer.
Comments from author:
Ah sorry, since the category was added I hope this isn't' a problem anymore.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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