Review of chapter "Train Stop Conversation" from
springReview:
Short and sweet, I like it.
Review By [
spring] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Train Stop Conversation" from
RevDorothyLReview:
In spite of the title, the first three paragraphs or more insisted this was a bus station conversation, and that Jack and Joyce were waiting for bus connections, not trains. You might want to fix that.
Review By [
RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Train Stop Conversation" from
linkReview:
So this Jack is the clone one. Nice fic overall. I can see Joyce initiate a conversation to a lonely teenager.
Review By [
link] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Train Stop Conversation" from
justapiranhaReview:
short and simple. Can it lead to other conversations?
Review By [
justapiranha] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
