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Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from (Past Donor)windeetree
Review:
Every time I read this story I love it more and more. Please come back and finish it, it's to go to leave like this.
Review By [(Past Donor)windeetree] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from breve
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i almost thought it was impossible for me to hate sam...i was wrong.
it does actually seem like something she would do.
please come back and update, i really want to see how this ends.
Review By [breve] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from ozseaside
Review:
Arrrgghhhh...
That's was my cry of fustration!!! *lol*
I've reread this for the umpteenth time and I SOOOOO wish your muse would come visit you again.
Just thought you'd like to know that.
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
Review:
I do hope that this might one day be updated.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Happy New Year and god bless.

I re-read this recently, good story.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
Review:
Please update this is a great fic and I actually like xander in it so please come back to it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Chapter 23

justice served....


Chapter 24

ohhaa I think that was very unwise from Sam. Right now only X is pissed at here, but soon
will be the whole council. I just wonder why Giles call got trough. Hope to see more of this soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from mountainelements
Review:
I think that you really should have had this chapter as the first chapter of a sequel because the tone is completely different from the rest of the story. That way you could have also mentioned in the summary that Xander's family by blood is causing problems with his ties to his family by heart or something like that.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from SledgeHammer
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Col. Carter forgot that Ms. Kinsey was charged with *high treason*. Civilian or military, that charge, if you're convicted of it, is punishable by death (in fact, it's the *only* charge so punishable in peacetime against members of the military; so says no less than the UCMJ). That is in the US - the laws of the UK are largely similar, ifd not identical, on the subject.
Jacob *shoulld* have reminded her of that.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from purrfus
Review:
Found this story again, read all the way through, and after a lot of thought decided to set tracking.

The chasm between chapters 23 and 24 was incredibly disruptive and disturbing. I finally decided, based on the previous chapters, to wait and see if the behavior changes would be supported within the story through flashbacks or some other mechanism. I hope so because this is a story I would very much like to see continued.

No matter what an author wants to do with a character - as long as the changes are supported within the story - its okay. Even if something isn't to a reader's personal taste it can be accepted if there is sufficient justification in the story and the other characters accept or tolerate whatever it is in a believable way.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter. Please update.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from LetsRandom
Review:
I liked the story up until this most recent chapter. As it is I'm not sure how I feel about this development. The actions Sam took seem really OOC for me and I find it slightly unbelievable that Xander wouldn't have occasionally checked up on his friends even if they hadn't called him. I understand the need for plot devices, but the way it's been set up, I find myself feeling slightly uneasy. At the same time I can't really judge until I read where you plan on taking this plot development, so I'm looking forward to your next update.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Bunney
Review:
Argh can i punch Sam in the face? Please?!?! :) I liked it alot and your storu progression is good :)

Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Ansku
Review:
Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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