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Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from fourmenandanelephant
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Really, Sam isn't in any way as stupid as you portray her... She and her father and Daniel would report what happened up thru the chain of command and get a response that way... After the end of the story as it is I can logically imagine Sam leaving thru the Stargate to join Teal'C in the Free Jaffa Nation and writing an open letter to the President calling him a coward, traitor and fool for allowing a group of murderous self righteous hypocritical vigilantes to hold the world hostage until they get what they want and that the Taur'i were going to reap the whirlwind after they allowed the actions of a single small nation and it's "sovereign" to alienate three galactic superpowers and numerous others. I can imagine Earth all of a sudden getting blacklisted isolated, and ignored all over the galaxy for threatening and throwing away it's greatest minds and true hero's and having it's off world bases missions and programs revealed and rendered totally null and void due to Revelations made by Sam, Jack, Teal'C and Daniel just from simple hacking of our international television feeds and revealing the Stargate program and the supernatural at the same time... I can imagine having Earth's Stargate's taken away by force as well so demons are forced to stay on Earth...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from twlight
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You really made me hate Sam in this chapter. The last time I read this story Faith and Buffy were going to beat up Giles' car. I do hope that the muse to this story comes back to you again soon, try and be nice to it and not hit it with a fish. I love this wonderful wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Josette
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I like Buffy and Xander together post s7. Please update!
Review By [Josette] • Date [12 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from ravrgrl
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Review By [ravrgrl] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from (Past Donor)windeetree
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Every time I read this story I love it more and more. Please come back and finish it, it's to go to leave like this.
Review By [(Past Donor)windeetree] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from breve
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i almost thought it was impossible for me to hate sam...i was wrong.
it does actually seem like something she would do.
please come back and update, i really want to see how this ends.
Review By [breve] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from ozseaside
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Arrrgghhhh...
That's was my cry of fustration!!! *lol*
I've reread this for the umpteenth time and I SOOOOO wish your muse would come visit you again.
Just thought you'd like to know that.
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
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I do hope that this might one day be updated.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from BlueEyedJedi
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Happy New Year and god bless.

I re-read this recently, good story.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from jgoodman
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Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
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Please update this is a great fic and I actually like xander in it so please come back to it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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Chapter 23

justice served....


Chapter 24

ohhaa I think that was very unwise from Sam. Right now only X is pissed at here, but soon
will be the whole council. I just wonder why Giles call got trough. Hope to see more of this soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from mountainelements
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I think that you really should have had this chapter as the first chapter of a sequel because the tone is completely different from the rest of the story. That way you could have also mentioned in the summary that Xander's family by blood is causing problems with his ties to his family by heart or something like that.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from SledgeHammer
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Col. Carter forgot that Ms. Kinsey was charged with *high treason*. Civilian or military, that charge, if you're convicted of it, is punishable by death (in fact, it's the *only* charge so punishable in peacetime against members of the military; so says no less than the UCMJ). That is in the US - the laws of the UK are largely similar, ifd not identical, on the subject.
Jacob *shoulld* have reminded her of that.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from purrfus
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Found this story again, read all the way through, and after a lot of thought decided to set tracking.

The chasm between chapters 23 and 24 was incredibly disruptive and disturbing. I finally decided, based on the previous chapters, to wait and see if the behavior changes would be supported within the story through flashbacks or some other mechanism. I hope so because this is a story I would very much like to see continued.

No matter what an author wants to do with a character - as long as the changes are supported within the story - its okay. Even if something isn't to a reader's personal taste it can be accepted if there is sufficient justification in the story and the other characters accept or tolerate whatever it is in a believable way.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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