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Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from ABFan
Review:
cry...i loved this so much that i wanted more. I don't think it's still being update though, too bad. Good job though.
Review By [ABFan] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Vickzie
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Cool
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from JayW
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Loved this! A little sad there wasn't more Asher / Dawn drama- I mean interaction ;)

Ahhh it's been a while since you added! How sad!
Review By [JayW] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Nakita
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Is Dawn going to put JC in his place? lol.
I can't wait for the one-on-ones between Asher and Dawn and between Dawn and Micah (I adore their friendship).
Review By [Nakita] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from AonGealach
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I can't wait for Asher to get Dawn alone!!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from KaterinaLafey
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What happened to the next chapter being up within a week or so? Please update! I love this story!
Review By [KaterinaLafey] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from mariegilbert
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I like the idea of how Dawn is "dreaming" Julianna's past...and hope you continue this in the near future, I'd like to see what happens at the rest of this meeting!
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from yakuit
Review:
Sweet - very sweet
Love your story hope you write more sooon.
xxx

Ps happy Valentine
Review By [yakuit] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from LeaFairy
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WooHoo, new chapter!! And a great chapter at that! I'm continuing to love the Dawn/Rona dynamic and how they both have the same sick sense of humor. I also loved the demonstration with Rona and of course Anita's 'intelligent' response of "bullshit" to the whole slayer thing.

Dawn's thoughts on Jean-Claude were spot on too and I can't wait till she kicks his ass with his future trying to manipulate her and the Council in general. I am curious as to what JC's thoughts on Dawn-as-Juliana are though? Obviously Asher is shocked, but definitely connects the two, but what does Jean-Claude see/think?

The whole story with Buffy and the slayer army killing a bunch of vampires, including the Master of London and then, with the help of the Vampire Council made everyone think it was the Harlequin was completely brilliant! Really kick-ass :)

Dawn being in complete denial over the all whole Juliana/past memories thing really does make sense and I can definitely understand why she wants to avoid it, but I have to admit I'm definitely looking forward to when she has to finally face it (all her past memories) and Asher and Jean-Claude.

Anyways, I'm super happy to have this update and I can't wait to read more in the future! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the great review! I'm trying to get the next update out as soon as I can. This one was written when my sister was down from Georgia, she usually pushes me to write and gets me past my writers block whenever I'm having a difficult time.

I love Dawn/Rona friendships. I thought of using Vi, but she's in so many fics I've been reading recently and I wanted to try something new. I loved Rona's character and it was relatively maleable enough for me to mess around with.

Don't get me wrong with Anita, I love her to pieces, faults and all, I think they make her more human and definitly a more likable character. I just wanted to keep her in character while still going along with my storyline.

I think JC is going to be the hardest for me to write, even Asher. It's hard for me to get into the male mindset, especially someone as sneaky as JC. But I'll give it my best.

As for Buffy kicking major London ass, well, I'm trying to draft onto her the perfectly balanced slayer/sister, I figure, after all these years, she's more emotionally healthy and in a mindset that she can do things like that without it affecting her too much negatively. But I'm trying to not focus on her too much. I do have plans for a sequal if I ever finish this and she plays a bigger part in that fic. The Harlequin cover up was completely out of left field, didn't even know I was going to do that until I had it written out.

Dawn's in denial :)) I'm going to have fun with that. ;)

Thanks so much for the review! I'll have another update as soon as I can.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Beth
Review:
I like this one and am looking forward to reading the next chapter and all that comes after that. When would the next update be?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, another one will be out as soon as I can type it up.
Review By [Beth] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Nummy
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I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! Ok I could go on forever.
But man, I really hope you keep updating cause this is really good!
Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it!!! Always nice to hear that someone likes this fic. I love it too.I'm really hoping to get the next chapter out soon, so stay tuned.
Review By [Nummy] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Almadynis
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Yay, an update! Very good...can't wait to see what Asher and Dawn come up with together!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing! And the compliment, I love those!!;) Yes, Dawn and Asher are going to be fun to write.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [2 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from obsidianvampgh
Review:
Thanks for the update on this chapter, I can't wait to read the conversation that Dawn and Asher have after the meet and greet. So excited!!!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're excited! It really means alot to me that so many people read this. I'm not sure if Dawn's going to stick around for a chat or run home and lock the door.
Review By [obsidianvampgh] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from AllenPitt
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One interesting thought--it isn't plain reincarnation since Dawn is the Key made flesh. So one wonders if the monks had turned the Key into a human before? Dawn just being the latest example of this happening...
It is funny to see her underestimate JC so much. But the real problem is, she's out of treats to give to Rona.
Comments from author:
I'm not relly going to get into a bunch or reincarnation mythology, mostly because I like the mystery. I will say this, the monks took Buffy's blood and made the body, Julianna was a witch, so she became the soul that gave the body consciousness, and the Key was used to animate the body and give it magic, at least that's how I see it. Joss never really came right out and said it, but I don't think that Dawn can stop being the Key, it is the very flesh she it. And in my fic, this is the first of its human incarnations.

I don't think she's underestimating JC, my Dawn is wicked smart, and sneaky with it. But JC is older than her and has been doing this for a very long time, so who knows.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Board Meetings Need Coffee" from Xeelia
Review:
Yay!! Thanks for this!!
Comments from author:
You are very welcome!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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