Review of chapter "The Alliance" from jupitersdaughter
This one I love!
Review By [jupitersdaughter
] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Good Information" from Satori
This one is pure gold. Willy, the snitch snitching on seth = lolercopter
Review By [Satori
] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Good Information" from WhiteWolf
I like this last one. Wiley and O'Neill. A great combination.
Review By [WhiteWolf
] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Should Have Stayed Home" from MissingAuthor
WOW... now that was just chilling. You really captured Hannibal Lecter personality very well. How you wrote what Kate was feeling and thinking was really good. Have to say of all four chapters this is my favorite!
Review By [MissingAuthor
] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Should Have Stayed Home" from Shieldage
Dude! The Hannibal Lecter one is awesome. You captured his style, how someone would react to his formidable self. You made Kate aware enough to carry a stake, but uncomfortable with it enough she'd risk reaching for a flashlight instead. They're both nice puzzles and executed well here :D
The Faith/Ipkiss one lacks umm... personality. You've described the first impression Ipkiss gives pretty well, but ya haven't described Faith in the slightest :D
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Should Have Stayed Home" from Charlotte
This was brilliant. You got Lector's voice down perfectly.
Review By [Charlotte
] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Not Rated