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Twenty Minutes with a Jaffa Slayer

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Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from Stationary
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I would really love to see this new player meet with the counselor and Buffy especially.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from mercifulblack
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Cool story.
Review By [mercifulblack] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from RevDorothyL
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Intriguing idea, and nicely done. However, I'd love to read more. What happens next?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from purrfus
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Lovely interlude. Interesting idea, and I would really like to see lots more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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I really enjoyed this ficlet and hope that it is the lead-in to a longer story or a series. As for the Slayer line and all of the canon nit-picks, no worries, the 'what if' in the story synopsis covers that issue rather nicely.

Thank you for sharing this, I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you write more about Ca'len, and that you keep Graham Miller in the story. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from greylight
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One of the things I liked about this is several characters already had an idea of what a slayer is, so when the two worlds collide its not information overload.

Will be looking forward to reading the follow up!
Review By [greylight] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from mithrilandtj
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Cool.

But wouldn't BOTH Buffy & Faith need to be dead?

Unless Buffy's first death completely split the Slayer line, in which on the death of EACH slayer a new one is called.
If that's true, then if the Jaffa girl was called on B's death, an Earth slayer would be called on F's death.

Either way, interesting story.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from YademosEbyam
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There was no sign in either season 6 or 7 that Buffy's death would activate another Slayer. Indeed, it is commonly accepted that the "Slayer Line" now runs through Faith, who was "chosen" following Kendra's death. However, it is not surprising that Captain Miller is unaware of this fact, as the existence of the second Slayer is probably not commonly known. Then again, this "fact" could be in error; if the calling of the SatakHaSha remained classified during this period, it would not have become part of S6/7 canon. I would love to see this issue clarified in a sequel. (Hint, hint!)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from LordCorwin
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my only question would be .. which death .. the first? second? Hmm, did she die a third time?
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from DancyerMcCoy
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Excellent! I hope you intend to make this a series, it has the potential for a lot of good stories, both serious and funny.

You didn't specify a time frame for Buffy. Is this post 'The Gift' or post 'Chosen?' Either way, I really enjoyed it.
Review By [DancyerMcCoy] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from theunixer
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I like it. A lot. Please continue it (with much longer length stories). It could be a series of her work at the SGC. Contact with Buffy and the others (via Miller?) should be made.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from JoeB
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I liked this one a lot. You might want to follow it up from the angle of a new slayer sundenly popping up in Colorado and having some people from the council checking in on whats up.

Well done.

Looking foward to more.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from Greywizard
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Very cool story. ;-)

And I definitely want to see everyone's faces when Xander or whoever is the local rep for the Slayer School shows up and wants to discuss the various schooling options and opportunities available to Ca'len.

Having Miller and whoever else might have transferred there from the Initiative vouching for them woudl make for some interesting situations, especially if SG-1 is told that they don't have high enough clearances to hear the full story behind Ca'len's enhancement. ;-)

And if you need a beta for follow-up chapters, drop me some email and we can discuss how we can work things out.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty Minutes" from jupitersdaughter
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Coolness! I'm gonna go let my imagination wander now...
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [15 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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