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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from MarieKnight
Really liked reading this story!
Review By [MarieKnight] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from deathgeonous
Ah, again, I'm slowly going over your old stuff. This was a good one, so, thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Shazam. Great story! I totally enjoyed it. Now I have to go sleep, but it was totally worth staying up for. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from Vickzie
Fantastic story! I love the idea of Buffy and Willow being The Neutrals. Can't wait for the next part in the series.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from maxthehobbit
This story sure doesn't appear to be finished, far too many loose ends. I also take it that you are not from an English speaking country as the grammar, spelling etc. are beyond belief, unless you are a person in the third grade. Apparently you Never read what you write or you would have corrected the hundreds of typos in this story.
As for imagination you deserve an A+ since this is totally original and the characters are brilliantly done. The plot was solid and believable in the fiction sense of Buffy and SG-1.

Get someone to proofread and correct your English and your stories will be much better, maybe even award winning.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from IBShayz
It's 4:30am and I finally finished reading the last chapter. Stayed up all night 'cause you sucked me in with one mighty good tale here (written back in '08) and now I have to go find out if you continued it in another part (fingers crossed). Very intriguing read. Love what you did with both canons and tho I'm not a w/b shipper, I found their being "mates" quite natural in this story. Loved the Lantean twist. Would totally love to know if Atlantis exists in this universe because that would be totally cool if the girls could you know --- make the CITY come to life as is should have (of course John Sheppard would have to be there because the City LOVES him.) Ok, I'm a bit sleep-deprived and rambly. Sorry. Enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing. Hope to find more in this 'verse.
Review By [IBShayz] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from BrownFinderth
Great story!!! And this is the end of Book One? I'll be taking a look for Book Two!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from obscure
I wasn't one hundred percent sure on this one at first, due at least partly to a certain fondness for Kennedy (I know that will probably get me lynched but never the less). Willow/Buffy is probably my favourite non cannon pairing so seeing that was a definite plus and your story seemed to flow well and have a consistent narrative, plus it was an interesting change to see the decision to have the previously unknown parent being Carter, as opposed to the more traditional choice of Jack O'Neil that seems to have become so entrenched in Buffy/SG1 paternity stories. Was a bit unsure in your presentation of Xander, but it seemed to work ultimately. Did seem to fall somewhat into the trap of having Willow and Buffy somewhat over powered, however since this is only the first part of this, and the foreshadowing towards the end, I presume that ultimately they will gain a similarly powered enemy to 'balance' it out. All in all an excellent fanfic highly readable and enjoyable.
Review By [obscure] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from deathgeonous
Very fun fic. Interesting as well. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from KiryD
YES!! Just now found the story and I'm sorry but I'm SOO glad I'm not the only one who hates Kennedy!!

About TIME Buffy and Willow got together!!!
Review By [KiryD] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from dracoluvr
omfg! i love this, and i cannot wait to get started on the other one, this story fucking rocks. sersiously! u r a very good author...toally fuckawesome :D one of the best ive read in awhile, and ive been readin fanfics for almost ten years. ur GOOD. lol. keep up the awesome work :D
Review By [dracoluvr] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Taryn
I love how you explained Buffy's life. I've never actually watched the show and I'm too lazy to google stuff so I copied and pasted your little timeline to my desktop for reference. It keeps the major stuff in order for me.

Good work
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Review By [Taryn] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven" from lucyferr
Her physical strength and speed were such that sparring was useless. Bridget estimated that to give her even an adequate workout, Buffy would have to take on several military companies.

Would love to see Buffy let lose on all the men in the military who've assaulted and raped their fellow soldiers for the crime of being female (and that's just the US military)

Great story, hoping to read book two some day. Would like to see
- more Sam/Janet despite DADT, even if Sam has to resign from the USAF to make it happen and become a civilian consultant,
- Dan & Dawn interaction
- less Xander
- Teal'c getting to say more than 'indeed'

Bit worried that W & B are too powerful, but they do have powerful enemies to go with it. Trouble is, it's hard to write a gripping, *human* story with mainstream (as opposed to comic book cult) appeal when the big bads & big goods all have superpowers.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from lucyferr
"She's your mom too, you know."
"You're my mom, Buffy." Dawn shrugged at the wide-eyed look she received.

sounds about right - wonder if Willow and Buffy can have kids ?

"The safeguards are lethal, and since we have ambassadorial status in every country, we will not be held responsible if our warnings are not heeded."
For a moment, it all sounded like overkill to the linguist, but then he remembered the atrocities that his own government had just perpetrated on an innocent young girl, simply for her 'supernatural' abilities.


“You will answer your God!”
“You, a God?” It said, amused. It’s voice was deep, but with a decided feminine quality to it that made it sound both alluring and frightening at the same time, and the Goa’uld had the sudden urge to bow his head in submission. An urge that he barely suppressed, and that infuriated him almost as much as the creature’s next words. “You are no God. You are nothing more than an insect. You reek of the vermin that banished me from my kingdom.”


“You have doomed us all.” One of the men replied, eyes wild with terror. “You are not our God. She was once our God. We brought her back into this dimension to serve at her feet, but she turned on us, killed us.”

Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from lucyferr
Illyria was wise enough not to approach them as arrogantly as she had the last time. She could clearly sense both who and what these beings were rapidly becoming, and the memories of her shell told her who they used to be. "I am Illyria. I was once God-King who ruled these lands with impunity."

wise indeed

"You make the mistake that all others before have." Illyria stated. "You attempt to place us in concepts that do not apply. My nature is not 'evil', as the muck consider it. That is a purely 'human' concept. Pure demons are not weighed down by frailties such as morals, ethics or consciences. You may consider my actions 'evil', but to me, they were done according to who and what I am.

interesting point

During the next few weeks, Sam truly got to know her daughter. Her likes and dislikes, the ups and downs of her life. They talked about her deaths and touched on her time spent in Heaven. They even talked about their respective dealings with the NID, and Sam told her about her dad, Selmac and Jolinar. Buffy found Sam's world as fascinating as Sam found Buffy's.

good bonding

"That Whistler guy intercepted the letter to me, what if they did the same with Hank? "

good point, tho he probably ignored it

She hadn't expected to be believed without question.

good angle

"What's it like to have a super-hero for a sister?"
"Not really as nifty as advertised. It's all worrying and fighting and more worrying, and after the fighting and the worrying, we usually end up patching her up, or burying her."

well said
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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