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Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from Balder
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I love this story! I hope you keep updating it!
Review By [Balder] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run along little doggies" from Balder
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That was a very nice non-lemon sex scene. :)
I also like the way you made Xander an Amberite, it was a nice background story as to why and how.
Great story so far overall and I'm looking forward to the rest.
Review By [Balder] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from JediKnight
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Hilarious job on the update here. Why not just have Serius blow up Raven's father?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [30 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from Bobboky
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awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from CageFire
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Hehe, another good chapter. :) I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from LFW
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I do not know the Teen Titans that well . . . and my first thought is who can Sirius mess up with magic?
But I loved the Joker getting run over by a British double decker bus
Hoping for more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from musumenosuoh
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Lol! Awesome! Poor Faith though!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from KrisB
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Faith "the intro girl" I like. Hmm, the magical scrying is fun. I actually didn't realize that the Doctor and Rose had tagged along as well.

I'm actually curious on what the elves actually are doing running around. I'm sure cleaning and house hold tasks are included in that some where.

Faith and Penny are really the only intro people that you can toss at others. Penny likely wouldn't really leave her store. It's her safety blanket. Faith, I can see exploring back there and explaining things to the Konoha group and Cissy.

That is most relaxed sane Buffy that I've ever seen.

I liked that Faith found a home. I can't wait for future clips of that group trying to map out their neighbors and trying to form a community.

I'm almost scared of the trouble that BB, Cyborg, and Sirius can cause without even thinking about it. I can't wait for Sirius to shortly become the most terrifying magical in Jump City. I'm sure that he has something like a mass shibari spell maybe combined with a tickling hex.

I loved the bit where the bus is running over random villains. I can envision Harley accidentally getting on the bus to get away from Bats and getting totally lost as well.

I can't wait for Clark to tell Bats that the Bus is some one's missing form of transportation that Wonder Woman scared off.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Faith finding family was totally "aww!" and very enjoyable. I suspect they're going to find they can get supplied and honestly, all they'd have to do is make contact with the House Elves and they'd be set. Heck, they could turn the football field and surrounding areas into farmland pretty easily if they're looking to homestead. I'm not sure if it's just the highschool or surrounding environs, but the whole Mall grab implied it would not just be the building...

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And the setting the Titans on the quest = great idea and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)

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Finally, the bus... oh my goodness, the Bus and Joker. Fall out laughing. Poor confused Batman. :)

I look forward, as always, to reading more. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from raxadian
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Faith needs some love, but I don't want her to just get stuck in the Car, she should eventually get out and go back to the good fight. Also, she could just ask some house elves to take her back to the exit, they can teleport, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking in the Shadows 30" from Dragonwolftiger
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So very appropriate - The Joker run over by Xander's Car in bus form *Snicker* Harley simply walking away fits too. Of course I like the fact that Faith found the other Sunnydale! I look forwards to more in your stories.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [29 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Zeviz
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This story was funny already, but this chapter was particularly hilarious.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from Oddshot
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I am enjoying this twisted story so far and hope you & your MUSE keep it up , Now a question you have Xander get a castle for his daughter and have S put it in his car when they all visit you have Penny's mall in the court yard so my Question is if S can move the mall there why cant he move some other shops and stuff closer to the entrance.


Yours Oddshot
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Wow...I'm sure Faith's not gonna be happy missing out on an orgy. Or maybe she secretly is, what with all the signs her ideas on intimacy and sexuality are armour for her.

Though I have to say, seeing Rose imitate Ten's "What?What?!" spiel is hilarious!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from CubsKing
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Excellent! Glad to see more of this.

But I'm still waiting for the obligatory "Airplane!" quote/pun:

"Surely you can't be serious!"

Keep up the good writing! (Or dictating, or whatever it is you do that you give to your typists...)

Mark
Comments from author:
Shadow puppets and interpretive dance!
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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