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Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from LadyFoxFire
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Please forgive me for what I'm about to do but this bunnie is stuck in my head and I can just picture Xander and Sirius ending up there. I think one of your last chapter started it off. Either that or is was too much Easter candy. But the idea if that Xander and Sirius end up in the universe of... 'Attack of the Killer Tomatoes'

I'm so sorry. I really hope they don't get stuck there or that damn theme song will never leave my head.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from Batamut
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Huh and here I thought the "heart" was suppose to represent a heart shaped bottom making Valentines day true meaning to be, well you can guess :P
Poor Gaara he has lost his first friend
Review By [Batamut] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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BWAH-HAHAHA!!! How long is it gonna be before they realize they have taken on borders?!? The Malfoys, the elfish invasion, and now, Konohagakure?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from coppinsom
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love this story cant wait for another updated
Review By [coppinsom] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from iamjmph
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so as always, love your work. Thanks again for taking the time to write and share with us.
I do have one question... Are the various stragglers they've picked up going to be found before they die from lack of resources?
Comments from author:
How do you figure they have no resources?
Review By [iamjmph] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from JediKnight
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Interesting job on the crossover, I just would have like Xander and Serious to interact with the Naruto characters(maybe fight along side them). Hope to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from dreago
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Couldn't figure out how to pm an author so...It's a bit funnier knowing the seed was used as birth control, so much so it was driven to extinction. The symbol was later changed to a heart by, ah, less open people.
Comments from author:
That just isn't as funny as the theory that it's a set of hanging balls.
Review By [dreago] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from TexasJack
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Good chapter kinda wanna know where the village got to though?
Review By [TexasJack] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from LFW
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Holy Aphrodite
I do not think that She is going to be annoyed but is a local Power going to be annoyed that Xander and Sirius just took the city I can not spell?
And whatever else they find
Darn funny for sure
Thanks
Looking forward to more from you
Comments from author:
Naruto's gods are pretty hands off.
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from dreago
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Hanging balls? Pretty sure the "heart" symbol originated from the Silphium seed pod. Not positive though, since I'm not a historian or anything.
Comments from author:
Which is a far less entertaining theory.
Review By [dreago] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from KrisB
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That turned out rather well. I can't wait until Naruto's group starts exploring their new safe haven. They'll have to change their village name to hidden or lost in the backseat now though.

I like how they have the little adventures to explore the backseat. I was thinking Xander needs a spell to where he could summon anything/one or just reach in and yank them out if needed. I think having the ability to summon anything from his storage space would give him the option of great back up as well as fun mix ups. I could just see it starting with Sirus trying something so that they could grab "support items" from back there.

Xander has like half of Hogwarts house elves, various house elves and prisoners from Death Eaters that he doesn't know about and many others. I think that Xander is vaguely aware that the house elves are all back there. What I see as fun/useful is Sirus mixing things up and doing a bonding spell for every one in the back seat to bonded to Xander and Sirus. It should be because some of the house elves know that Xander is the true owner of the place and ask to properly bond with him and Xander of course asks Sirus for overwhelming help with it.

It would be terrifying if everyone that he loads back there auto bonds to him and gains a bastardized version of house elf abilities where they can basically sense Xander, and their area of the back seat and have the ability to pop to him to do tasks that he subcon wills. When I say that could be terrifying, could you imagine going against him, and at any moment a ninja, slayer, or house elf popping out to assist him? Imagine them going some where that Xander feels is really messy and could use a good cleaning, and suddenly his army of house elves appear and start cleaning everything before returning to the back seat. Of course, I could see him feeling horny and Faith keep appearing.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from Jaylynn
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Somewhere safe huh? I wonder where that could possibly be. Not like they have a huge empty space just waiting to be filled up just sitting around. XD
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ninja Vanish!" from Toras
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Nice chapter. I really want to see the reaction of Xander and Sirius when they find out about all the various people they've picked up. Let's see there's Narcissa and her daughter, plus the hostages in Malfoy manor. The Various House Elves they picked up from all the Death Eater mansions & Hogwarts. Faith who is still sleeping on her bed on Matilda the flying carpet, and now they Entire village of Konoha. I would assume of all of the either Faith or the Ninja would make themselves known first since they would be the most likely to go looking to find out what happened to them. Of the two I figure Faith is more likely since once she wakes up she's going to go looking for Xander to find out what's up. Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Toras] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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