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Review of chapter "The Soldier" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Definitely different...any chance of more in this vein...hey I'm a sucker for Riley &/or Graham....throw in John Winchester and I'm set
Comments from author:
There mos definitely could be, I love the Iniatative boys, they got saddled with maggie and still made it.

Glad you liked.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Soldier" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
An interesting take on a what if scenario. Not quite sure why Riley had to be a child John gave up or how that worked into the story itself but hey, I'm not the writer. ;) Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank you and if I continue John didn't give Riley up (on account of not being told he was born).

I'm glad you liked it, I've never really written Riley before.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Soldier" from Rebelgirl
Review:
Very sad. I liked the fact that you named Riley and Sam's son after Xander, (spot the fangirl can we?), and the way you linked the two worlds together. But why did John give Riley up? And when did they find each other again? Or am I just being a bit daft asking the second question?
Anyway, cushty story.
Comments from author:
Ask all the questions you want, there good for the muse. I am going to go withthe whole John didn't even know about Riley until he was fll grown man angle. Thank you and I am glad you liked this.

Yeah we aer all fangirls, I had fun with teh name, it was so close to being Daniel lol
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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