Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from ambe
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Wow. That was fantastic. Thanks for writing and sharing this intriguing story with us. We have similar thoughts about a lot of characters and situations in the BtVS verse, so I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
PS - I LOVED your very detailed notes, especially as there are a couple of sources of inspiration that I haven't read and am now planning on checking out.
Review of chapter "You eat with that mouth, kid?" from lucyferr
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loved the chat between Faith and Dawn - cool slang there, lots
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Mystical History of the World, Part II..." from lucyferr
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Tough. If he was going to explain that "not complete" statement before Hannibal had an embolism, he was probably going to have to resort to like, complete sentences And words and shit. She grinned. Would probably prove as fun to watch as Willow in full-on babble-mode.
lol - you got the Faith tude down good, yo
Comments from author:
lol - thank you. Glad you liked it. ;)
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [29 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from starshinedown
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I loved reading this. LOVED reading this. Faith as a faceted person, who has *gasp* read! books! and can put two and two together...it doesn't happen near enough in fanfiction, for me, and you did a beautiful job of it.
I'm far too impatient, when I'm in the grip of a good tale, to leave a review at every chapter when I see that there is more to read, so alas, my memory on the specifics that I liked is fading. The mulitple references, be it pop music, movies, books, or canon literature, were greatly appreciated. You had me reaching for the way-back machine to high school and college when I a) glutted myself on speculative fiction and b) was forced to read "smart stuff" like Lord Tennyson. Light, I can't believe I'd all but forgotten how much I like his writing.
Robin's portrayal didn't totally jive for me, but given my overwhelming like for this story and the human connections that you/Faith forged in it, I can shrug off someone else's interpretation of a character I never really cared all that much for/about. :)
I'm off to the next installment in the series. I'm wicked excited to see where Faith's journey takes her.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Robin's portrayal... (and others): keep in mind: you are so far hearing the story through *Faith's* point of view, and she is heavily biased at this point. When I get to touch on Robin's side of things much later, he may come off as a bit more sympathetic, if not precisely likable. That's my hope, anyway.
I'll just say that Robin's not a total schlub or bad guy in this, even if he is a bit of a jerk with Slayer/mommy issues, and leave it at that.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from caissana
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I gotta say, wow... good job!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! ;)
Review By [caissana] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: That which we are..." from Jinxy
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I love the end of this. Perfect. The goodbyes with Abby and Wesley especially were wonderfully accomplished. I can't wait to see what th road holds for Faith next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;)
Does that mean you're moving on to the next stories in the series? ;) It'll be interesting to see your reaction to "Life is a Road".
Review of chapter "For I am a part of all that I have met..." from Jinxy
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You know, it's an interesting aspect that you had Faith read so much in prison and reason the way she does...not at all uncharacteristic though. I never thought she was stupid, merely ignorant of typical education, and she was probably afforded little opportunity to be much else growing up. She is a bright girl, she simply needed time and a motivation to work on it. I also enjoyed Cordy's and her conversation about the blame over Faith being ignored and going bad. I always blamed the Scoobies too, but upon Faith's words, I realized that in fact she's right. they were just kids, younger than I myself am now, and can hardly be expected to have noticed a girl's struggles when they were heavily into their own. it's easy as an outsider to say what they should have done, but real kids in the real world in a situation like that wouldn't have seen it or known what to do either.
Comments from author:
Too many people write Faith as stupid and illiterate. I've never really seen that in the episodes she was in.
"I always blamed the Scoobies too, but upon Faith's words, I realized that in fact she's right. they were just kids, younger than I myself am now, and can hardly be expected to have noticed a girl's struggles when they were heavily into their own."
They might have seen it, but know what to do or how to handle it? Probably not. Xander noticed and tried - but at 17, it would have been extraordinary if he'd been able to figure out how to go about it successfully at that stage of things when Faith was already traumatized almost past reaching.
While I don't let Buffy off the hook for her self-absorption and dishonesty, Giles is the one I really hold at fault for the bulk of that season 3 (and season 2) mess: he's the *supposed* adult in the situation, and he's the supposedly professional Watcher. And yet he ignored Faith's obvious issues that came out as early as FH&T, and left her to rot in that motel without apparently making the least effort to see to her upkeep or care. Also, without apparently making the least effort at seeing to her mental health in the wake of watching her Watcher tortured to death in front of her by Kakistos...
Faith was a classic case of untreated PTSD and falling through the cracks, and it continually amazes me how some segments of fandom can wax eloquent on how great a Watcher Giles was throughout the series.
IMO, if Giles was the best the Watcher's Council had to offer, then the only sad thing was that someone didn't blow up the Council with everyone in it long before season 7 - because Giles was a pretty piss poor Watcher and human being, all things considered.
Review of chapter "Dancing in the Dark..." from Jinxy
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Amazing dream sequence...I also enjoyed the chapter before where Wesley met up with the Blade characters, an odd group but definitely interesting. Thank you for this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. That was lots of fun to write. ;)
And Wes and the Night Stalkers did make for an interesting image, hey? What'll make for a real fun meeting at some point would be Blade and Angel. ;)
Review of chapter "I read a book, once. Honest..." from Jinxy
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I like how Dawn and Faith are interacting; I always thought they had a sort of spark in canon friendshipwise, or that they could have. Dawn has certainly grown and matured. I like how you had her say Buffy is in the mode where she suddenly huffs about Faith knowing what she meant, lol, very Buffy. You have a good handle on all characters. I also enjoy seeing how Faith is starting to grow unsure of who she is as she matures.
Comments from author:
I always thought ME missed a bet in not bringing Faith back early in s7 and having her actually interact with the other characters more. You know - the ones she actually had *history* with? As opposed to Woody-sue and Spork....
I always figured that Faith and Dawn would probably have hit it off once they got past that whole "tried to murder my sister" thing. ;) If for no other reason than that Faith wouldn't have any reason to try and coddle Dawn and wrap her in cotton. Plus, Faith is probably fun to hang around with.
Review of chapter "Evil in the air and thunder in the skies..." from Jinxy
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That was stupid of Buffy to call her and chew her out like that and not believe Vi and Giles. But it was very Buffyish...I think Faith handled it well considering, she certainly made Buffy speechless lol. I like how she and Abby are developing a relationship.
Comments from author:
Stupid yes, but very in character for Buffy, IMO. Especially for late seasons Buffy, and especially given her attitudes towards Faith.
Review of chapter "You eat with that mouth, kid?" from Jinxy
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I'm very much enjoying this story so far. I never watched Blade but they seem a good team with Faith. I myself never liked Wood so Im glad she broke up with him, especially for such a reason. Your portrayal of Faith in particular and the others as well is spot on and very likeable of course; her handling of Wood's transgressions and her feelings over Buffy are particularly apt. Looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the review. ;)
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from MarcusSLazarus
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Nice bit of work, I have to admit; intriguing exploration of one of my favourite characters- Angel's pretty much my favourite, but Faith's always had that certain edge I've always found appealing-, combined with a dramatic crisis AND an opportunity for her to work with one of my favourite film characters.
True, I wish there'd been a bit more Faith/Blade interaction- to say nothing of maybe a meeting between him and Angel; now THAT would have interesting to witness-, but what there was here still managed to be good, to say nothing of how Faith went on to help Abby learn more about her new 'destiny' as a Slayer.
Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
"True, I wish there'd been a bit more Faith/Blade interaction- to say nothing of maybe a meeting between him and Angel; now THAT would have interesting to witness-"
As much fun as that might have been, it just didn't fit the plot. I thought I was pushing the limits of what I could work in without hitting "kitchen sinkism" as it is without trying to cram in a Blade/Angel meeting this time around. As for Faith/Blade interaction... I'd like to have seen more myself, but it just didn't work out that way in this story.
Ah well. Fodder for future fics. ;)
Thanks.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from GundumM
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from Obsidian
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That is a Damn good Faith story. Bravo. And thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
You're welcome and thanks for the review.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Afterword and Author's Notes..." from TroyGuffey
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WOW!!! GREAT STORY!!! Added as a recommendation.
Love The Dream. Guardians of the Flame is one of my favorite series, too. And Steinman is a great songwriter.
Nice GURPS plug, too.
One complaint: You should have lost the UV laser bat'leth. It *looks* kewl, but the actual supposed workings are idiotic.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and glad you enjoyed it. ;) Also, glad to see people are still reading this series and enjoying it.
"One complaint: You should have lost the UV laser bat'leth. It *looks* kewl, but the actual supposed workings are idiotic."
Possibly but it's too late now. Besides - it's the Buffyverse, where a college kid on a relative shoestring budget (Warren Mears) can create an April-bot, a Buffy-bot, and later on a Freeze ray and and Invisibility ray and jet packs. I suspect that a *little* rubber science from the Blade-verse blends in just fine here and feels right at home. ;)
I'll make a deal with you: if you can *convince* me that Buffyverse rubber science in the universe is a go, but Blade-verse rubber science is over the top, I'll rewrite those sections. Gotta say, though - you have an uphill climb on that one.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]