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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SmithAndWesson
Review:
Please, can I have some more? Here's to wishful thinking. More than 3 years since the last update and still patiently waiting...
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from cptquinn
Review:
In the name of Illyria, UPDATE ALREADY!
This story is awesome, and I hate that its been untouched for 2+ years.
Please continue.
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from FireWolfe
Review:
Interesting story even if it does have Rm bs in it. I like Willow live and let live attitude.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
What? Come on, man! UPDATE! I'm on the edge of my freakin' seat, here!
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Honestly, you rush far too much; a number of what are single or double paragraph 'scenes' could easily be entire 2000+ word chapters. Also, Willow the Wonder Witch, more powerful than everyone including ancient Nox? It's clich├ęd and it wasn't even that great the first time.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from apollo
Review:
Are you ever planning on continuing this? It is a good story, and I like it.
Review By [apollo] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Oddshot
Review:
Just read this story and added it to my tracking List I do hope there will be more Chapters to come .

My Rating it 8/10 is to hopefully get more from this Author .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from tals
Review:
Lovely universe you've created here. I like how you manage to blend in sg1, bsg, heroes and btvs/ats, and have it make sense. Great storytelling; the characters are well-written and complex, the story has a nice flow to it, and the plot, as well as the overarching mythology of this universe, has stirred my interest. Thanks for sharing your story(-ies).

Regards Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will get inspired to post more chapters soon.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Dragonelf
Review:
I think I found the reason why this entire chapter is in italics.

The reason is that you used 28 pairs of EM tags through the entire when you only needed one or perhaps two pairs of them.

Just remove all of them except those that surround the Author notes for this chapter and you should be fine.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from LordCorwin
Review:
I'm of two minds, I'm hoping that Illya stays "good" .. or at least Neutral towards humanity (after all, we're slime ... maybe less than that to her) ... I can see where she'd want to smack the ancients and company around a bit, but I also think she's of the mind to - let bygones be bygones, ... you leave me alone and I won't come back and destroy you ..... after smacking them around a bit.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Valkyrie
Review:
I'm kinda hoping that Illyria puts those ascended wossnames in their place.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AllenPitt
Review:
funny how nobody likes the ascended beings---they don't help when it's needed & interfere when nobody wants them...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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