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Review of chapter "Last Dance" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
I loved this ending it gave Dean such dignity and grace and he had a true soul-mate.
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Last Dance" from Arekanderu
That was a really sweet ending. Good job
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Last Dance" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
I've been quietly reading this series on and off, admiring how competent and good you are for a first time writer.

Oh my goodness - Anne.

First off I love Dean and Anne as a pairing idea, I think they could work really well together.

Loved the bit where Anne comes to Dean's aid, if you'd ended it with their first kiss the story would have worked out fine.

If you'd ended the story with them going to bed together the story would have worked out fine.

Dean could have come back to Anne once Sam had removed the curse. Happy Ending nice.

I love Happy Endings don't get me wrong.

But the last third of this story was over heavy on the added sugar and fluff. (enough to make me pull a face)

Although I have now heard a new term - 'Irish twins' which is an 'interesting' phrase to add to my general knowledge. Like I said, you're a technically good writer.

So I'm really looking forward to your next effort, you should definitely try your hand at another Supernatural cross or any other cross that strikes your fancy.

But remember to lighten up on the schmaltz
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comments. I was very nervous about posting for the first time because just about everyone's work on this site is very well done and I spend all day writing business correspondence.

The 'Irish twins' thing is something of a joke between my Irish friends. One of my guy friends and his sister are called that because they both full-term babies and were born 11 months apart.

I wasn't really trying to add sugar and fluff, but rather demonstrate what I though a relationship between soulmates should be. I thought about what John had said in the first season - that he wanted Sam to go to college and for Dean to have a home and I considered what kind of a home Anne would give him. Given how much family means to Dean, to me, it was a sanctuary from the evil outside their walls. I do appreciate the comments, though, and I'll try to keep an eye out for too much sap.

Thank you for taking the time to read & review. I definitely appreciate feedback as I am a bit of a novice at writing fanfic.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Last Dance" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
*stomps foot

it was beautiful and wonderful and you made me cry dammit.
Comments from author:
Thank you...if it makes you feel any better, it made me cry, too...
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Last Dance" from PrincessTai
I can't kill you for that. That was beautiful. Absolutely so.
It wasn't disgustingly mushy, it was soft and delicate but so damn Dean who can be soft and delicate when he wants to be :-D Anne. Wow. Of ALL the girls I would have NEVER thought it would be Anne. That was ... I don't know. Fantastic? Wonderful? I just say THANK YOU for writing it. Oh goodness I love this story. They had kids! Even Dana found love, she had a son.
Dean named his daughter Samantha. Sam and Vi, Molly. She's a telepath. They all made it past their six months. Dean died in her arms. Sam's the last one standing. The last one to make sure the new brood know the Winchester way. It's better than I could even imagine. I DOUBT the creators of Supernatural would come up with something as cool.

And title. So simple, so sweet. So fitting in so many ways.
I hope you write other stories, I will be looking forward to them *bg*
Comments from author:
There are a lot of things in your review, so thank you, thank you, and thank you!

I really enjoyed writing this - more than I thought I would. I saw a lot of commonality in Anne & Dean, especially in how she floated from place to place and created a new, but temporary, life for herself everywhere she went. It made me think that she was someone who could give Dean the stability he needs for a home, but the freedom he needs to hunt.

I just finished typing up the first chapter of another story, actually, and it will be posted as soon as my best friend is speaking to me again. She's the one that is always killing off characters - I always have to save them - so when I do it, she doesn't react well...:)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read & review. I do take requests if I can manage it, so e-mail me if you want to see a pairing and I'll do my best. See 'ya on the flipside...
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey! That's My Gun!" from PrincessTai
I was wondering how you were gonna pull that one :-D
Nice. Quite unexpected. And nothing having to do with Sammy.
Comments from author:
Well, they still have a job to do...:)

Thank you for reading/reviewing!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wild At Heart" from PrincessTai
Dean. He's usually pretty quick on the uptake. Why hadn't he figured it out yet?
Though it IS good for Sammy that he hasn't. But totally bad for Dean. It's on bitch?
LOL! Moron. :-D I know he meant Sam but really. Female werewolf not to far away *snickers* Very well placed.
Comments from author:
Well, a little prank war is a good distraction to keep Dean from figuring it out...:)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wild At Heart" from link
I like it when Nina threw that brush. Serves him right, ogling her shamelessly. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Comments from author:
thank chapter chapter will be up, if my beta approves, tomorrow...
Review By [link] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, I've Been Electrocuted Before..." from exqurere
liking the Sammy trying to find Dean's soulmate! I'm sure you've already decided who it is but I'm going to put a vote in for Buffy, big fan of these two
Comments from author:
Would that I could, but Buffy/Dean was already done as an FFA, so she's kind of out...

However, I am writing an answer to a challenge that I saw on the site that was a Buffy/Dean, so stay tuned. I just want to finish this story before starting the next one. Shouldn't be long, though...

Thanks for reading & reviewing!
Review By [exqurere] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hey, I've Been Electrocuted Before..." from PrincessTai
Ooooo. So are we getting warmer in the soulmate finding? :-D
Comments from author:
There's not too many people left, actually. I think I have two more chapters and then he'll find his soulmate...sigh!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You Just Keep Your Witchcraft To Yourself There" from PrincessTai
No, tell me exactly what he said.
For all his smarts Dean's totally clueless. LOL :-D
Comments from author:
Sorry it took so long for me to reply to your review. I missed a couple here and there, but it was unintentional, I promise.

I just love much fun to write! He can be the good guy, yet still be the devil on the shoulder!

Thank you for your review!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Handcuffs" from PrincessTai
>>> Sam banged his head against the wall
What would Sammy do without Vi and Dana in his life?
There is only so much BS he can spot before Dean starts to get even MORE suspcious.
I like the territorial Slayer bit you put in there :-D Nice to see even the level-headed and Sycthe-activated ones have it. Thought it was just Buffy, Faith ... and okay, maybe Kennedy :-)
Comments from author:
Dean's suspicious, of course, but he's more suspicious in the "Sammy's getting rid of me so he can research and look for a way out of the deal without me there just in case that can be construed as me trying to get out of it" kind of way than a "Sammy's got a plan and is already executing it" kind of way. Now that you mention it, though, I think I'll make that more clear in the next chapter...thanks!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Handcuffs" from link
I just need some clarification. Andrew is the one that send all those women to Dean so Dean can find his soul mate right? It seems to me that Andrew is turning to be a pimp. Dean only interested in having one night stand only with the women :)
Comments from author:
Technically, he's sending them to Sam, who then filters out the ones that he doesn't think will match Dean immediately. Then, Sam figures out a way to get them to meet and just "see what happens". He's not going to sleep with all of them...Dean is also looking at this from the point of view of "going to die" - he's not going to sleep with someone who would want a lasting commitment because he couldn't give them one. That's why he didn't go after Vi. She wanted more than what Dean could offer. Kate is older and has been in their world longer, so she doesn't have the same expectations. She's actually the only one that he's slept with thus far, and he's met ten or twenty of them already (Dana, Vi, Eve - off-screen mention of having met Faith). He is meeting with a number of people off screen that presumably inhabit the supernatural world, but are unremarkable or wouldn't fit with FFA b/c they aren't BTVS/ATS characters :). Hope that helped!

I just had the biggest giggle over the vision of Sam all pimped out...thank you...
Review By [link] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Connection" from link
I love the mushy stuff between Sam and Vi. So, grandchildren? Sam live that long? I can just see the smirk that Dean will throw to Sam when he knew that Sam did get laid.
Comments from author:
Many close calls, but no one ever really dies in my stories...unless I don't like the character. I've faced that reality.

Yes, Dean is very happy now...his family is taken care of and that is what he needs before he can go...well, if they were going to let him go (see above...)

thanks for reviewing!
Review By [link] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Connection" from PrincessTai
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals with all types of happiness* Dean sure knows how to pick 'em. From one who writes yentas to another. I give ya major props :-D
Comments from author:
Thank you - I was trying so hard not to tell you that I decided to keep Vi around in my last comment, but I didn't want to ruin it for you...I alwasy thought that Dean knew Sam very well and would probably be right on the money for the person he would choose for him.

I'm currently writing another story, answering a challenge actually, and I have a feeling that Vi will make an appearance in that one, too...not sure how, yet, though...

More to come later today...

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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