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Review of chapter "Step One: Sarcasm ALWAYS Impresses The Mothers" from ariannasanders
Review:
What about Xander as the child's "mother"? After all, he is a demon magnet and the universe's butt monkey. And there is simply not enough Xander/Cole fic in the world.
Comments from author:
Oh, Xander would be a great "mom"! I think he'd be a great parent either, and he wouldn't have dealt with Cole's emo-shit of becoming the source of all evil, or his lies. But I don't think he would have given up on him, at least not a more mature-lost-an-eye-Xander :-D

Thank you. That's such a great idea. I am going to hunt google down for Xander/Cole, because you just gave me a sudden fix for them! There really aren't.
Review By [ariannasanders] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I have this story line idea and I need your help." from greenamber
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Have you maybe thought of the idea of Anya could be the mother. She after all use to be a demon in Buffy world. She could have met cole as a demon and Connor is the result of them getting together. You could then have Connor have some "wish" giving abilities like she had as a demon. That kind of power could be interesting for the charmed ones to deal with. Or another idea out of all the shows you listed there was no mention of Mutant X. If you do not mind the show maybe Shalimar Fox, she has simlar powers to the Connor.
So far I like your story, please update soon.
Comments from author:
Anya? Oh. Wow. I never have thought of her. Even once. I could so see Connor getting annoyed with the wish deal. Patron Saints of Superpowered kids who get royally shafted. No, I'm serious here. It'd be something interesting. And oh how they'd embarrass him. Poor kid. I'm thinking maybe a redemonzied Anya so she can have the human touch.

Shalimar? Oh wow. It's cause I haven't watched that show in ages. Stopped after Emma left basically. Used to adore it. Oh that'd be all kinds of fun. You're right. 'Cept I think he'd be better in faster and seeing in the dark thing. And can you imagine her and Cole as parents? Poor Con. They'd be a fam of badassness. Poor Adam, actually. lol

As for this story. Thanks. I am working on a scene with Kenyon waking up but it's being difficult. Hopefully it'll be out soon. As for um, this story. I wanta get a head on my other ones first. And maybe see what else other people say. I'm waiting for someone to make the same suggestion or something. Or maybe I'll put it for a vote. That'd be smart of me.

Thanks for your suggestions and your review! :-)
Review By [greenamber] • Date [26 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I have this story line idea and I need your help." from AmethystSiri
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I really like the idea of Connor as Cole's son (there aren't enough Cole stories), as for the mother I really, really liked your suggestion of a male mummy :)
Therefore, my vote is definately for Dean from SPN, who else could you see standing up to Cole when he gets evil but who won't give up on him when he does something idotic, I mean Dean stands by Sam no matter what. Maybe becoming pregnant by Cole was Dean's alternative to the crossroad deal he made for Sam?
Comments from author:
Damn I must say that is a convincing arguement. One point for Dean DEFINATLEY!
I agree. Cole needs more action in the world in general.
Pregnant by Cole huh? I was totally going for um lab baby, but ya know with magic.
But your idea works a lot. And it'll make my brother happy, that at least one of the parents know about Con. In fact with this maybe both of them do. For Sammy not to die you have to have a baby by the former source of all evil and then they take Connor. Which would put a spin on things. Instead of Connor thinking that his way is good and his parents are evil, it could be cause his parents are too good. That is unless something happens ... I'm getting a head of myself. Thanks for the idea! And the name :-D
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I have this story line idea and I need your help." from Jess
Review:
Harry Potter is an excellent choice even if I do say so myself.
Comments from author:
Harry. Really. Huh.
Yeah. I can see that. Actually. He and Cole are similar enough to work but at such odds they wouldn't get along. And Harry is always playing mediator. He'd be able to get through to Con.
And with Harry Con'd get Gramma and Granpa Weasley *bg*

Thanks! Point for Harry it is.
Review By [Jess] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step Four: Don't let the bullies pick on the kid" from mithrilandtj
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I love the Conner banter.
Comments from author:
Thank you :-D
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step Four: Don't let the bullies pick on the kid" from purrfus
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I could so see the exchanges - its nice Wyatt isn't the only immature one in the family. Of course that is probably an insult to Wyatt because so far he's been one of the more mature and better behaved members of the cast.

Chuck's inner dialog and speech to Ken provided a lot of interesting background, and should help Ken adjust when he finds out.

Cute fight scene - nice cross between the usual Charmed blow ups and the BtVS style talk'm to death.

More please.
Comments from author:
LOL No it's the truth. Wyatt's one of the more mature characters. Wyatt and baby Chris.
And maybe Kit the cat. But that's how siblings are. I'm seven years older than my brow and we fight like we're three and four it drives my parents nuts lol

Chuck. Yeah Chuck like you saw on the author note. Got away. But I figured since he is getting away I might try and grab him back and make him, you know. Useful lol
Glad the fight scene wasn't a total dead weight. Connor talks a lot. I noticed but that was to cover my lack of action skills, I was like thank you Buffy for never shutting up! It wouldn't seem out of place if Con didn't lol

And I am working on more. Just got tests but I'll sure try.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step Four: Don't let the bullies pick on the kid" from littleoldme
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The reading was a little rough in some points- a beta would probably be of the good- but I still like the direction this is going, and Connor bantering back and forth with the demon amused me.
Comments from author:
My beta doesn't watch Angel but I suppose I could use her wonderful grammar skills.
Maybe next time :-) When I'm not too lazy and actually wanna wait.

Yeah the direction actually isn't really planned. This was originally supposed to be a one shot. Then a three chapter story and well, here it is. And I am glad you liked the demon. Connor doesn't seem to be typically quippy like Paige or Buffy is. He is a bit of a strange, but interesting, individual and I tried to have his banters show that. The demon, personally, I thought was ineffectual but it served his purpose. Which was bantering :-D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: ... and DON'T play twenty questions" from AmethystSiri
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Very exciting :) I am looking forward to more :)
Comments from author:
Oooo exciting! *dances around in my seat* I like that adjective :-D
Writing more as we ... err, type lol
Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: ... and DON'T play twenty questions" from purrfus
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Nice opening scene. Lovely dialog between the sisters, and even better between Paige and Kenyon. Ouchy on the door.

Hot nurses = excessive? Hmmm... all at once or in shifts?
Comments from author:
LMAO! All at once of course *bg* Isn't that the only way? lol
And thank you. I thought it might be a bit of a cliche but would be sweet none the less. Glad you enjoyed the opening scene. As for the sisters, yay! It tried hard not to have Phoebe too 'ugh' and Paige too Pipery. Piper is my favorite, I think in Piper. She's just so fun. I am happy that Paige and Pheebs were fine without her in it. As for Paige and Kenyon? Yay me! lol
The door, I thought would be funny. And displaying how things are coming to fruitation. Because I'm sure Kenyon's done Connory supernatural stuff but people have gone all Sunnydale syndrome around him and explained it away. I wanted to show that it's more than the house playing tricks with him. It's always been there. A part of him.

Thanks so much for the reviews! You're consistant. Cookies for you. And you can have a male nurse too lol
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step Two: Try not to space out ..." from littleoldme
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Very cute! Wyatt and Connor were adorable together.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step Two: Try not to space out ..." from mithrilandtj
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Ah.
So Kenyon doesn't REMEBER being Conner.
Interesting.
Comments from author:
No he does not. At least not yet :-D
Thanks for the review!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step Two: Try not to space out ..." from AmethystSiri
Review:
Great story :) I am really looking forward to the next chapter, please update again soon :)
Comments from author:
Thank you and I will try my best :-)
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step Two: Try not to space out ..." from purrfus
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Wacky family. Nicely put together with lots of fun, cute, and cutting dialog.

Loved the game of catch.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I know. When I was going back to read it, I was like yay me. That's kinda cute.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Step One: Sarcasm ALWAYS Impresses The Mothers" from Chosenfire
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I love this, it was fun to read and the witty dialogue was spot on and enjoyable to follow. I like the name and the whole Kenny and Pip thing at the end had me grinning, great job :D
Comments from author:
Damn I should write stories when I'm sick and half a sleep more often!
Kenyon means 'famous wolf'. And Connor means lover of wolves. So since Con is the Destroyer and everyone knows about him (at least by name) I decided to use Kenyon
I am glad you like the dialogue. I might go back and read it some time lol. Glad that the sarcasm came through. Cause they are ones with the biting wit. Piper and Paige. And Mr. Broody Jr. :-D

Thanks for reviewing!
Appreciate it
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Step One: Sarcasm ALWAYS Impresses The Mothers" from littleoldme
Review:
I love your irreverent treatment of Connor's character here- the references to him looking like a girl and his flash of being attracted to older, brunette women were particularly entertaining. Can't wait to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks you! I didn't think that Kenyon would have any need to be all broody, even sure that trait is genetic lol, since he's a Bennett and not an Angel. But somethings can't be change no matter what.

Appreciate the review :-D
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [28 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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