Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Very nicely done! I can see the Master using his powers of Mesmerism to enslave the master to do his bidding! Or, in this case, in the words of Don Corleone, make him an offer he can't refuse!!!
Review By [Harry
] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TraceyC
I'm impressed - you beat me to this one, too!
I loved the Master in the Doctor WHO 'verse - I'm not sure which you're using here (Delgado? Ainley? The new guy, maybe?) - but I liked this - the Master of the DW verse is even more of a egomaniac then the BTVS one, and he is more the chaotic kind... never know when the knife will be at his ally's throat...
You got that DOWN in the story. Great job with the characters too - and you kept them VERY in character!
Review By [TraceyC
] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jrabbit
Review By [jrabbit
] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated