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An Act in Two Parts

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Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from (Current Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
Ooo. I don't know why I haven't read this series before. Wesley and someone else (especially Spike) keeping Angel Investigations going is one of my favorite AU variations of season 5, and I really like the inclusion of Mini-Jack. On to the rest!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [(Current Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awww, darn. I thought you had picked Mini-Jack from while he was on the run from the SGC and big-Jack was still stuck on Loki's ship :/
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from Geyer
Review:
I'm glad you're thinking of continuing this. The concept of Spike and Jack as friends and partners in fighting terrestrial evil is great, and I like the way you've set it up; both of them could benefit from sharing the fight. I'm looking forward to watching you develop it, either as the drabbles you mentioned or as longer stories.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting start to a story, but nothing has really happened so far. Just two chapters that end with a 'Now what?'
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm SO hoping for a sequel, now that Jack's about to find out you don't need to have access to a Stargate to fight the good fight and keep the world from ending (at least for some folks) every other Tuesday.

Thanks for this lovely story, and I sincerely DO hope it inspires a sequel someday.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from manic
Review:
Quote: An actual milk-run

LOL! Somehow, Jack knows this is his ticket out of duldrum.
Review By [manic] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I really think TPTB at MGM really made a mistake in not doing anything further with Jack's clone, but I'm very glad that we have fan fiction to make up for this lack. I enjoyed this remix from Jack's point of view and look forward to more. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from mithrilandtj
Review:
You SO need to do more of this!!

It's so GOOD!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from nimthecat
Review:
more! pleeeeaaaaassssseeeeeee???
Review By [nimthecat] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two: The Victim" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
So VERY good.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One: The Hero" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Just PLEASE tell me that you are going to continue this? I'll grovel if I have to in order to get a story with mini!Jack and Spike in it.

Also, I love that Spike is immune to sunlight. Entirely too cool.
Comments from author:
I am continuing this. Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One: The Hero" from Geyer
Review:
Great start, and I love the idea. This story have lots of possibilities for future sequels. Looking forward to Part II.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I'm planning a drabble series actually.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One: The Hero" from manic
Review:
Oooo, neat concept. And even better that the "victum" as mini-Jack.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [manic] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One: The Hero" from azulkan
Review:
Interesting...looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part One: The Hero" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I adore the idea of Spike as supernatural-mentor to clone!Jack -- and what a great set-up, with Spike doing the roving demon-hunter routine after all (seems like in this version, the answer to Spike's question, "you mean, you want to start annoying other people?" was a resounding "Yes!" that actually got some follow-through).

Can't wait to see what comes next!
Comments from author:
I thought that they would make a good match (student to mentor wise).

Thanks for reading.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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