Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kuznetsov
Facinating idea. I really liked the terror in this little drabble.
Review By [kuznetsov
] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Anneliese
Creepy concept. Just a suggestion, you might want to not depend entirely on spell check. You wrote 'ever' in there once when it was clear you meant 'never'.
Review By [Anneliese
] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated