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Review of chapter "Roommates - Joy Of Joys!" from BrownFinderth
Review:
It's been an interesting story for sure!! Yet, I do hope the author is able to come back to add to it, as I like to read more!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roommates - Joy Of Joys!" from SwimmieTeam
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Did you put Paige there because of the Darth Willow thing?
Well, I like!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birthdays And Sortings" from PrincessTai
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Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. I protest!
Paige a Slytherin? How could that EVER happen. Then again, maybe I shouldn't. Your version of the girls are a bit different from canon. Things change. Still makes no sense to me. Paige. Could never be Slytherin. Phoebe. DEFINITELY. Girls been swayed by evil too many times. Prue. Maybe. But Paige and Piper are strong on this side of never. And even that I'd say Piper WAY before Paige. I don't think there is a gooder witch out there. Paige isn't even really my fave, Piper is, but I have to honestly say of the four, in my mind Paige is the most pure white witch and not even cause of the half-whitelighter thing. It's her stalwartness and dedication to magic. Prue did it as a duty, Paige more out of interest and then later innate responsibility that grew into something strong. So make with the explainy chica cause that makes no sense to me whatsoever.

Other than that interesting chapter. Is Lucy going to be bothering Paige? Since his daddy doesn't like her? He'd be a bit older than her.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birthdays And Sortings" from WinterRayne
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I can so picture Dawn falling on her face!!!
Great update!!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to the hospital wing" from PrincessTai
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It was like the story read my mind as I read along :-P
First thing I thought was that the girls were a bit too OCish, not Dawn, but Paige and Phoebe.
It seemed as if they were one and the same but after a while, starting in the hospital room, they started to 'sound' more like themselves. While they were talking to the boys. Paige's babble cinched it of course :-D
I was also wondering where Lily was and then she showed. Very much in character and very much frightening.
I also thought of Snape and then you mentioned him. And I was uber creeped out LOL

The demon illness thing was a bit random, I think, but it is something Dawn would do and it was a great way to connect the group (so maybe not SO random). It got everyone talking and connecting. Pot and Booze huh? LOL Really, that IS the part he focuses on. I am NOT at all surprised. *giggles*

A note on the memory spell. Why do you think it'd be Paige who'd think something like that?
It seems like a Phoebe like thought to me. Paige was troublemaker but more in the slacker, if I remember, Phoebe was the leather wearing crazy one :-P Which is so strange to coincide with Ask Phoebe but there ya are. However, again, applaud for the Dawn. The out burst sent me back into the giggling :-D As did miss 'problem child' and James getting slapped.
Idiot. lol

All in all it was a very fun chapter and I demand more now :-P
Seriously though I hope you add Snape and other Slytherins soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks =D I'm glad you liked!
There are 'circumstances' that will be explained later that make Paige as she is, which willbe revealed in the next few chapters (hopefully!)
The next chapter should be up soon, although I'm afraid no Slytherins till the chapter after that!
Again, thanks for the feedback!
Soph x
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to the hospital wing" from Infinix
Review:
There are so many things that can go wrong with messing with canon this much but I am going to cross my fingers and hope they don't actually happen. I do have to wonder about both the nicknames and why Paige didn't just heal their injuries.
Comments from author:
Hopefully they won't go wrong! Lol! The nicknames are mostly power-related (will be explained later in the fic!) And as for the not healing of their injuries, the girls are only teenagers, so their powers aren't really that far progressed, it was ages in canon before Paige could heal at will - it'll be a little while before they're at full power capabilities! Thanks for the review!
Soph x
Review By [Infinix] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Selling out the universe – Or not" from PrincessTai
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I was SOOO happy to see that you had Paige's 'Willow babble' down pat. Oh Paige takes Willow babbles to a WHOLE knew level. And you got that giggle she does. And Phoebe inability to lie like a normal human being. And Paige's instincts and bluntness-They are better than even Leo's- and I love that little Pru bit lol. And Dawn being annoyed about being a prophesy and trying to give Paige the puppy-dog look.. It was soooooooooooooooooooooooo in character :-D But what is with the mind link?
I also love the thing with the three types of magic. Hereditary wandless, ala the Charmed Ones and Tara. Earth magic ala Willow and wand magic ala Hogwarts. Very cool :-D And the fact that they are cousins in a way is cool too. Everything works out! Question though. Why is it nineteen ninety? The Mauraders were in school around the seventies, and Dawn born around the eighties. So not getting the time line, I'm sure it works out like everything else but I am not getting it :-)
>>>Remus because he didn’t want Sirius to make too much of a fool of himself – and the rest of them LOL
Nice. I don't get the nicknames. Lune makes sense. But what is with Halfy and Leafy? Leafy because of Paige?
Comments from author:
Thank you =D. The mind link is kind of vaguely explained in this chapter, but I'll try to develop about explaining it as the story goes on. The fact that it is 1990 will just help the future plot to sort itself out a bit (without giving away too much =]) so yes it will work out (hopefully!) eventually. The nicknames will also be explained, but I figure explaining it now won't give much away, so Luna is Dawn because she's a bit Loony - and of course, the irony of Dawn and Lunar, Lunar being related to the moon. Halfy and Leafy have slightly more tenuous links to the characters: Halfy would be for Paige, to signify that she is half-whitelighter; and Leafy for Phoebe (even more tenuously) because leafs, specificly tealeaves, are associated with the power of premonition - which, of course, is Phoebe's power. Dawn's just doesn't link with her power because we don't know it yet.
Hope that answers your questions!
Soph x
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Selling out the universe – Or not" from littleoldme
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This continues to be really unique and well-written. I'm a bit iffy on the characterizations- so far, Phoebe, Paige, and Dawn are pretty hard to tell apart in your fic. They're convincing as teenagers, but not necessarily as Dawn, Phoebe, and Paige, all of whom have pretty distinct canon personalities that you seem to be missing here. I think that's because you're concentrating so much on the girls' friendship that you're not really doing justice to their individual characters.

The idea of trinity witches is extremely well-done! Great job. I'll have to get used to the idea of the Mauraders being in the 90s- it just seems so weird, given that Harry technically started at Hogwarts in 1992, and the Mauraders were students at Hogwarts in the 1970s. Other than having computers present, this is an AU that doesn't seem to add nearly as much to the fic as it takes away, and it seems like it would have been really simple to preserve the timelines to some degree- Dawn was born in 1986, and you could have altered Phoebe and Paige's birthdays without setting everything back by 10-20 years, which seems a little excessive.
Comments from author:
Ah, the whole timeline thing will all become clear eventually, I promise it wasn't just to make everything easier! Preserving the timelines would just take away a part of the story which is yet to come =P. And as for the characterisations, I know they've been a little iffy - but their individual personalities will begin to come out in the next chapter. You might find that they are a bit different to the show at first anyway, to fit in with the plot - and of course because Paige and Phoebe in particular have a fair bit of maturing to go before they can grow into their characters. But thank you so much for your review, and I'm grateful for the constructive crit. - it helps me to improve!
Soph x
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue - Portals" from Infinix
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Hmm could be interesting, or it could into some horrible train wreck of a mess. The fate of the story is going to hang largely on the pairings or lack thereof. Lots of potential for humor with Dawn, The Mauraders and the younger Halliwells.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review, I hope I'm up to the challenge! Lol.
Soph x
Review By [Infinix] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue - Portals" from WinterRayne
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Great start!!!! Can't wait for the HP part I love Maurader fics!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've really gotten into Marauder fics recently too, hence this!
Soph x
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue - Portals" from PrincessTai
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Oh shit!
That was soo cool!
First of all. Phoebe and Paige as teens, JUST how I imagined it.
You even put the facial expressions in, and certain words were obviously just Paige. Both girls were rebellious when they were younger but they were different, Phoebe was a bit darker.
Paige was more .... bratty. The Phoebe insulting Pru and sulking while Paige is the one who plans? Perfect.

I hope you explain a bit more how they became friends.
I thought the ending was a bit too dramatic, but the tears make sense. Who knows where she's going.

I can't wait for the next chapter *grins*
Comments from author:
Yep, who knows...apart from me! Muahaha! And you, when I get the next chapter up! Lol, thanks so much for this, I was a leetle bit worried about my character depictions - I'll just say now that their characters may be a bit different to in the programs, but they are teens after all, and have quite a bit of growing up to do yet! =P. How they became friends should come up eventually, but everything seems to be progressing a bit slower than I anticipated, so it could bge a long, long time! Thanks a lot for the review, 'preciate it!
Soph x
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue - Portals" from littleoldme
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What a great premise for a cross! I love the AU that Phoebe and Paige are teens and that Prue is still alive. Super fun! One question: where's Piper in all of this? And how is there a power of three with four sisters? I'm excited to see Dawnie, Paige, and Phoebe continue their adventure!
Comments from author:
Thank you =). Piper is still living too, if that's what you mean. She's siding with Prue about punishments etc, but neither Piper or Prue will really feature much in this fic at all. The power of three is just Prue, Piper and Phoebe: Paige does have her powers but isn't part of the PO3, i do intend to make clear what will happen about that since there is now no Paige or Phoebe there, but it could very well be a long way off! Lol, thanks so much for your review!
Soph x
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [1 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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