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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
There wasn't enough meat in this story to get me. Even drabbles can have a STORY to them, and this one didn't have much- no dialogue, very little action, no demonstration of the relationship. I would have much preferred it if you'd SHOWN us what happened instead of TOLD us. This is especially important when you change a character's canonical sexual preference- if you don't SHOW us the relationship, instead of just telling us it exists, how are we supposed to believe it?
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Summers and Sommers; that will be a little confusing for other people.

Oh, don't forget that disclaimer. The ever present black hats will flick their wands in your direction. Ouch!
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tammin
? Is this the "Steve Austin" Jaime Sommers or the new bionic woman of this year. Simply because I really don't see old Jaime being so ho-hum about the taking of a life.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Dare I mention that it's Jamie Sommers, not Summers, in the Bionic Woman...?
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Ouch! Crowbar through the head - that's gonna hurt...
Comments from author:
lol, I know. That line was why I rated it FR18. I guess the story didn't need it but I thought that Buffy needed to do something.
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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