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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from randyzoopurple
Review:
Can't wait
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from fanreaderonetwo
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The last update was in early March 2014.

Please Update!!!
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [2 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen—Finals" from Jiopaba
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The grade sheets have become 404 errors. I can't find them anywhere on the web now.
Review By [Jiopaba] • Date [22 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from aspifgnfu
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I love your story. I always start over at the beginning when an update comes through just to make sure I don't miss anything. I look forward to reading the next chapter, please keep going.
Aspifgnfu
Review By [aspifgnfu] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I finally got a chance to read this and all I can say is now I'm waiting with bated breath for the next morsel. I know it can be hard to update a story often, but for this story more than most, I really do wait... (then sometimes when you do update, life has gotten away from me!)

More soon, I hope.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from ShyBob
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The your rendition of battle in the Initiative bunker is the best-written I have seen anywhere. The clarity and flow are amazing. Just the icing on the cake for this story.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from batzulger
Review:
Still great.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Cataclysm" from FireWolfe
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I really need an update of this and your other works going into withdrawal here:)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Lirael
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Absolutely wonderful. One of the most engaging stories in fanfic. Keep up the good work!

Most of my major comments appear to have already been made by others so I'll just try to summarize what stood out to me the most. I like what you've done with Kennedy, fleshing her out as a major character is pretty much unique as far as I've read. I wish more people would try inserting their crossover characters subtly like this, having Buffy go through the Air Force Academy was a good call. Her relationship with Jack is perhaps more than a bit rushed, but it's close enough to the realm of plausible that you can call it PTB interference and it works. I'm wondering what will happen with Dawn, will she go to Kennedy as the active Slayer or Buffy because she's mostly out of the action and therefore "safer"? I can honestly see it going either way. I'm interested in seeing where Teal'c's suspicions about the results of their sparring match go. I was positive that some amount of the secret was out after the Initiative, and honestly hadn't considered your solution to it until I read it. I'm wondering when/how Buffy's powers will be revealed, and whether the "she's a hok'taur!" explanation will be used at some point.

Don't keep us waiting on an update for too long! Remember quantity is more important than grammatical perfection. :D
Review By [Lirael] • Date [11 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Keshkreature
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*squee* Just re-read the last chapter. Totally can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
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Glad to see this story back and updated! I could actually tolerate alt!Kennedy somewhat too... Nice cliffhanger!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [10 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from queenevil
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Love the updates! Keep them coming :)
Review By [queenevil] • Date [3 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from randyzoopurple
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I'm really excited for the next chapter
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One—Truth and Lies" from preier
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fantastic story. i was a bit annoyed at the xanderbashing in the first chapter (and the braindead moment of all the cast) but i'm really pleased to have pushed through. the AF academy part is well balanced, especially showing both hardships and their meaning.

buffy and jack's daughter/father relationship was perhaps a bit fast (on jack's side, especially) but with plausible help from the PTB, why not ^^

thank you for sharing your tales
Review By [preier] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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