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Crookshanks to the Rescue.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HappyMumble
Review:
Very cute story :)
Hehe like the way crookshanks rescued :D
Review By [HappyMumble] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cflat
Review:
Cute.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [cflat] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueScreen
Review:
lol,

caused me to chuckle.

Has Crookshanks been spending too much time around Harry Potter? And gained a Saving kitten thing?

BlueScreen
Comments from author:
Yes! Imagine spending year after year with Harry Potter. Some of his 'good' trait gets pass down to Crookshanks.
Review By [BlueScreen] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
That was a sweet story and a clever idea on blending Clem and Crookshanks.

Next time watch your tenses, is English your second language? Either put the whole story in past tense or present.

I prefer to read stories in the past tense personally.
Comments from author:
Yes, English is my second language. I've only been learning it 2 years ago. Thank you so much for your review.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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