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Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from trongod
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I went back and re read this, and still had problems with you gender changing poor Blaise from female to male in about 3 chapters or so; also the "facts' read by Malfoy and Ron - which were merely suppositions and popular beliefs, as neither had actual evidence presented to support them. Bethany bops between being condescending and educational, granted it would be hard not to be as she isn't that much older than her students yet has two Masteries, but still...

Going back now to finish from Chapter 6 on...
Review By [trongod] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from ChaosLady
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That was amusing if unexciting.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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This is an amazing read; it drew me right in. I'm not entirely sure how I've missed reading this one but I look forward to seeing future chapters. The Harry Potter canon characters are spot on in personality and behavior and your original characters are quite likable and show a good grasp of character creation in your writing.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lewis Family" from CrystalBlaze
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I have to say, this is a spendid piece of work.

I rather suspect that Albus wanted to bond with and teach Harry once he learned a Horcrux was killing him.

Albus.. doesn't take well to losing those he regards as family.

Snape has been handled rather well, in addition. (between the Pensieve memories which I highly suspect were there just in case Harry needed to learn and get a wake-up call from their mututally frustrating occlumency lessons and the events dealing with his demise in Book Seven, I rather suspect Snape hardened his heart in advance in case he had to kill Harry and was such a prick so Harry could and would kill HIM if it came down to that, as so nearly was the case!)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lewis Family" from Demonspawn
Review:
Awesome. I Want More!
Review By [Demonspawn] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lewis Family" from ChaosLady
Review:
I forgot about this little gem of a story! I'm going to start tracking now.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leaving For America" from fran
Review:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day, Part 1" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
OCs can be tricky but since I've written a lengthy LOTR-Buffy cross featuring one I always try to look for decent ones. So far I'm entertained and will hopefully get a chance to read some more :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day, Part 1" from purrfus
Review:
Original characters can be a problem. Most writers seem to have a problem balancing them with the established characters and not inserting themselves in the story.

Ms. Lewis would at first glance appear to be a victim. However, the writing is extremely entertaining, and I going to wait and see what comes next.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting introduction. Nice snark.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23" from (Recent Donor)ElessarNett
Review:
An interesting story, and very fun. I do hope you update soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElessarNett] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from spring
Review:
This is a wonderful story so far. I really enjoyed the dragon pox illness that was extremely funny to read. I hope that Professor Snape and Professor Lewis start acting like normal "oh I like this person" people soon although the arguments are very very fun to read. Again I love this wonderful story and I am looking forward to reading more hopefully soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [30 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from winnie
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What a lot of fun. I can just see the dancing lesson and the results of the orders meeting. looking forward to more as soon as possible. Thank you.
Review By [winnie] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from winnie
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This is a really good story. I hope that it is not dead, there is the potential for lots more. Thank you for your work.
Review By [winnie] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Tentrees
Review:
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
Review By [Tentrees] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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