Review of chapter "~*~" from Aista
An acquired taste like caviar. Very emotive.
Review By [Aista
] • Date [4 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from Callista
Strange story. I like it, but I'm not sure if I really understand it. Still, it's worth reading!
Review By [Callista
] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from FaithsVoice
Wow. That was odd and fascinating and kind of wonderful. Tender and sad and perfectly right. Still, I can't help but hope that the three of them find each other again, somehow, some way. I'm sure they're still tied together...
Review By [FaithsVoice
] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from chaoticteacup
That was REALLY REALLY good.
My mind is blown. Completely blown.
It was lyrical and misty, like a half realized dream. Beautiful and Ephemeral.
Review By [chaoticteacup
] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from Elissiaro
I loved it... I... Don't really know what else to say, so... Bye. ^^;
Review By [Elissiaro
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from Wizzzard
This is magnificently beautiful, and I thank you for sharing it with me. And the provocation intended with the lackluster ending succeeded in the extreme. Hope to see more in this vein, and may the muses be ever present.
Review By [Wizzzard
] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from Lilkitsu
Grrr... I simply cannot stand stories that end like that. DOn't get me wrong, this is very poetic prose. A lot of feeling and imagery that really emote a lot. But the "it's like nothing ever happened" ending always feels like I'm getting the bird. Maybe it's a closure thing, I dunno. But I definitely dislike those "it was all a dream" endings. Otherwise, the stories great.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you like it. As for the ending, well, I meant it to be annoying. No closure for the end of the world. So I guess I'm glad that worked on you, too. :)
Review By [Lilkitsu
] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from starshinedown
I have goosebumps, reading this story. It is haunting and beautiful to read.
Review By [starshinedown
] • Date [17 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from zili
Wow this story is all kinds of crazy good. It was definitely an interesting twist. I liked it. Now I'm off to read trinity, while I wait for a new update from the take away devil.
Review By [zili
] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from nomanic
I read this in the cold dark to the sound of breathing sleep and your story filled me with beautiful poetry. Thank you.
Review By [nomanic
] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from TroyGuffey
I almost cried at the end when they didn't know each other....
Review By [TroyGuffey
] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from TurquoiseGirl
I liked this very much. I didn't think 'eccentric' at all. Just...different, and the story works. As for coherency, well, who said Magic was coherent in the first place? It just is, like this story just Is. Besides, I followed the storyline pretty well. Any questions I had at some point were clarified and answered in a later section. Yet another great job writing.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl
] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from lckybr
Review By [lckybr
] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from feekh
Every time I read this I sob. Every single time, never fails. So in lieu of leaving incoherent whimperings here, I will instead post one of my favourite bits. Or at least the bit where I went: Oh, THAT'S my favourite bit and replaced it for the other.
"“Kill me,” one pair of green eyes orders with all the calm in the world. Hurt me, bleed me, make me break, is what echoes across her mind and she’s not sure if she doesn’t mean it. She’s tired of scraped knees. Luna turns away, starting to doodle with her wand on the floor.
“Are you sure?” Harry asks."
Those lines are the epitome of this for me, so very sad and beautiful and just brilliantly written.
Review By [feekh
] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from daydreamer
I really enjoyed reading this story. It is quite different than any I have read. Thank-you for sharing this with us.
Review By [daydreamer
] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated