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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
I liked it, but I seriously would like to read more! Like how and when Xander turned. Was it during his road trip? After the hellmouth closed? How did Xander meet the others and what lead Xander to allow himself to be turned. Or was he turned against his will? It didn't sound as if he wanted it (and his character from canon sure hated the vamps he knew).
How did Buffy find out? Did she catch Xander feeding? That's the only thing I could think of why she would capture Xander. Afterall, she had sex with two other vamps when they weren't killing people, so she might of thought
Xander was trying to kill whatever person he was feeding from.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the story.
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Those are some good questions.
The only thing I can say, for now, is that he was turned against his will.
I do try my best to keep with the spirit of canon, as that's the character whom we've all grown attached to.
Also why change perfection? I just tweak a bit here and there but do my best to keep the core personality firmly in place. :)
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I may develop the story at a later date, but for now my hands are full with, "A New Tale"
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I'll do the next best thing, though. If you or anyone else would like to play in my story's multiverse feel free. Just send me a link so that I can read it as well. :)
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wraiths
Review:
This is an interesting story and I hope you do not make the slash graphic if you continue this story. My only complaint is that this looks like a chapter from the middle of a story not the first chapter and is this really a one shot.
Review By [wraiths] • Date [6 Oct 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LNR
Review:
I really love to read the parts that took place before this chapter, and the rest too.
Review By [LNR] • Date [6 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hpssslashfan
Review:
Is there more?
Where is Willow? Giles? Dawn?
Why did Buffy torture XanVamp instead of doing the Soul curse?
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Poor Xander! How could they do that to him! Couldn't Willow have done a spell and seen he still had his soul? Glad LaCroix rescued him.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
A dark story, but I like it. Would like to see more of it also.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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