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Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from Blackett
Review:
i give it a 9 because i was upset of the lack in updates....it was such an wonderful start
Review By [Blackett] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wish" from FireWolfe
Review:
This needs an update sometime soon as do your other wonderful works.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just reread this story and I hope you get inspired to continue working on it.

::Gives the plot bunny some Swedish Meatballs with mashed potato and lingonberry jam::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from apollo
Review:
Oh, please continue this! I love your premise, and I want to see more of mini Jack; as well as Buffy & Xander's new relationship.
Comments from author:
This I'm definitely continueing, my muse is just taking its sweet time in getting there.
Review By [apollo] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from zafaran
Review:
{snicker} Well, as far as Justice Demon's decisions go, Hallie taking Mini-Jack to Xander seems to be an inspired choice. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
I have half the of next chapter done, but I've gotten stuck.

*Sighs*

It could be a while.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from stasa
Review:
Very nice, I always did think that Jack and Xander have a sort of a connection...
I'm curious about the time-line, how is that working out? And,is Jack now in a different dimension?
Keep it up...
Comments from author:
Jack's not in a different dimension, though I may have played with the time-line a little to put him with the scoobies so soon post-chosen. Will be continued. Thanks for the review.
Review By [stasa] • Date [6 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from kiddo
Review:
awesome ! i love mini-jack. i also like the fact that you made him shy instead of abrasive/hostile though that might be because he's scared, i know i'd be. i'm glad you made mini-jack act more like a teenager instead of well a smaller version of big jack.
Review By [kiddo] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from Stranger
Review:
Yay, an update! I'm a happy lady! I'm so glad we got another chapter on this one, I really like this story - and what's with that lil memory bit anyhow?
Review By [Stranger] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am looking forward to read any future chapters you might get inspired to write.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from manic
Review:
I'm enjoying the fic, thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
To those who read these: 'bout half the next chapter has been written now.
Review By [manic] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from Shezzi
Review:
ooooh, I'm really liking this, is Jack gonna lose all of his old memories as he gains new ones? and is SG1 gonna find out he's missing and try to do something about it? please update soon, this is really interesting! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
OK I officially have another story to keep track of...by the way well done!
Comments from author:
Thank You!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from RevDorothyL
Review:
If Halfrek's really magicked in some retroactive childhood memories for Jack, will those eventually over-write his 'own' memories of being Col. O'Neill (rather like the unspooling of the Ancient database, both times Jack had it downloaded into his brain)? Or will he be more like Connor near the end of Angel season 5, with both sets of memories to draw upon?

Loving the possibilities here, though I'm slightly squicked out by the thought of how young Buffy would've had to have gotten pregnant by Xander (what are we thinking here: a slightly less happy ending to hyena-Xander's 'wooing' of Buffy in season one?) in order for Jack to have conscious memories (meaning he's at least three years old) during the battle against Adam at the end of season 4.

Still, can't wait to see how it all plays out.
Comments from author:
You're pretty close to figuring out what I'm doing, but I nobody has gotten it right yet :)

Thank you so much for this very thoughtful review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Doctor and a Yeti" from thundever
Review:
Great chap, brilliant interactions, poor Jack he is probably getting more confused by the minute and not liking it at all. Please update soon and let everything work out for Mini Jack.
Review By [thundever] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wish" from Miranda
Review:
cool..

great start... only thing im curious about is how old is jack supposed to be and how old was buffy and xander when they "had" him.
Comments from author:
Soon, all will be revealed. I think.
Review By [Miranda] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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