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The Firebug Series: The Witch

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Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from YoukoK
Review:
I really like the idea behind this and the story is well written to do you think you could make a sequel of some sort?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

I nearly completely forgot. I actually have a sequel written - I just need it beta'd to ensure I didn't go overboard with the ability.

Hopefully, I can have it posted in a few weeks or so.

So, thanks again for the review (and the reminder. ::grin:: )
Review By [YoukoK] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from Greywizard
Review:
Coolness. Wouldn't mind in the least seeing this turn into a series of short stories or vignettes. ;-)
Comments from author:
I'm actually considering it ... just trying to find my muse ::muttering, looking under desk and couch:: Coulda sworn she was just here a minute ago. ::grin::
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from neverwill
Review:
I like this and would enjoy reading more of Pyro!Xander. If you do write more, I'd suggest renaming the story, since the "witch" part was pretty much over in the first chapter. It would be interesting to see if his powers increase if he stretched them by using it more in a targeted fashion to help him against demons, etc. Are his powers mystical or psychic?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from Cutiepie
Review:
The first chapter was good, but the second made for such a nicely wrapped package. It filled in all the little holes that were peeking through. Thank you for adding it on. I would enjoy reading more, if your muse is so inclined. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from Bumpkin
Review:
Well, that certainly does a wonderful job of rounding things out and making this a full feeling story. Answers a lot of the questions that were feeling a bit hanging from the last chapter. Thank you so much for writing and adding this part. I enjoyed it a great deal.

thank you for sharing,
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Comments from author:
Thanks for being so supportive - in my own head, the first chapter made perfect sense. It wasn't until people started to review that I realized that - oops! no one else knows what I was thinking.
Thanks again.
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Explanation - of sorts" from micedden
Review:
love it wil they be more
Review By [micedden] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""The Witch"" from Ladeia
Review:
I liked it but felt it just wasn't complete. Need so much more. Pretty please??
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""The Witch"" from Infinix
Review:
Ooo could I have some more please? Lots of potential here.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""The Witch"" from Bumpkin
Review:
Hmm I liked this a lot but I have to say it didn't feel complete - I mean it didn't feel like you explained everything that you wanted to explain.

Why in your Author notes you said it was inspired by the book burning in the one ep and the house burning in the other - yeah they both happened around Xander - but you didn't really make me feel that Xander knew that he was doing it, or even have an inkling that he might be the cause. There is a good basis there and I can see where you started to make the connection with the note and the story - but you never followed through.

I did really like the interaction between Amy and Xander and how he helped her get out and to her father's care - that part on that level felt very complete and was very nicely done. :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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