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The Girl Across the Road

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
Mysterious visit,
From a kindred spirit.
Soothing one soul,
Intriguing another,
While helping the other.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I liked this, until the red-haired bit, because either Buffy has worn a wig (why?) dyed her hair red (WHY?) Or, the most plausible, it is actually Willow who gives a shit about finding Angel. I don't see Willow having the soul deep connection to him. If it was going to be that kind of story, I think you need to establish that a bit earlier, because as it is, this is quite unplausible now.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you feel so strongly about the ending of this story. Yes, you're right, Willow is the girl across the road. However, I don't think it's so implausible that it's her instead of Buffy. Surely a witch who has twice restored a soul would be able to sense it.
Having said that, the story was written to have a deliberate sting in the tail, although I'm sure that if you take the time to read it again, you'll notice clues (for example, Cordelia tells her that she "could have found him in High School" and she traces Booth down with a computer search) that subtly give away the fact that it's really Willow while not actually telling the reader that it's not Buffy.
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, even though you didn't like the ending. I hope it doesn't put you off reading any of my other stories, if they appeal.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mendenbar
Review:
Delicious. You had me convinced that it was Buffy until you showed your hand at the end. I had to go and check the entire story to be sure you hadn't called her "Buffy" somewhere. Very nice.
Wish there were more.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mendenbar
Review:
Excellent misdirection. Liked it a lot.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from seeleysangel
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I hope this is going to continue. Well Done!!!
Review By [seeleysangel] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Christy
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oh wow..so very interesting...and I like how you tied the two series together...would you be writing more?
Review By [Christy] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkRose
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I seriously hope that it is not the end I would love to read more and see where this goes, I hope you change your mind. I have started tracking this story just incase you have second thoughts and continue.

smiles and hugs have a great day xox
Review By [DarkRose] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from harpy
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The end? What end? Hello? I want to read ,more! This is great and has so much potential. I'M gonna start tracking it anyway, maybe you change your mind. *whining* Please?
Review By [harpy] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mackenziex
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Now is there going to be a chapter two? Cause I wanna find out if Willow actually talks to him! (grin)
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Tantalizing.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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