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A Long Night

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Review of chapter "A Long Night" from Fayari
Review:
James Potter was not some great man. He was a pathetic little bully who could only feel good about himself if he got everything he wanted and put down someone who could not properly defend himself three on one.
Comments from author:
Thank you for review but I do disagree with your statement.

This is my interpretation of how Xander would've seen James. Despite his actions during his time at Hogwarts, James did turn himself around. We don't even know a lot about James and his actions after Hogwarts so, we really don't know what he might've done. The same could be said about Severus Snape, his actions during Hogwarts were shallow and selfish and even his actions to help Harry were shallow because of his love for Lily. Snape was also a bully to Harry while Harry was at Hogwarts because of his jealous nature.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from spring
Review:
Interesting, I like it.
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from Christy
Review:
interesting concept, if a bit to flowery in the wording at the end.
Review By [Christy] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from ashez
Review:
Huh, is Xander related to James/Harry Potter or is this just a 'the world's gene pool is shallower than you think' sorta thing?
Review By [ashez] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Very interesting scene! But I would dearly love to know more about what happened and why Xander looks like James Potter.
Comments from author:
You may get your wish :) I have a few people telling me to continue it but I have a lot of things with my schedule that may not let me do that.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from IceBlueRose
Review:
If you decide to create a 'verse of some sort from these ficlets of yours, you do realize that I'll do a happy dance, right? Right. Good.

I do believe you just implied that Xander was related to James somehow. Whether you meant as a son that was put up for adoption for some reason or just as a relative that the others didn't know about, that was the impression I got. Unless it's just supposed to be coincidence. But either way, I really liked this and the way you have each character knowing about the other's world and that moment at the end where Xander saw the Malfoys and wanted Anya just made me go "Awww."
Comments from author:
Hmmm, maybe? ;)

Well honestly, it was just a coincidence type thing, but now you have me thinking. I did the Anya thing just for you :)
Review By [IceBlueRose] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from Yojo
Review:
Brief, but well constructed and tied off. I like how you were able to keep the story contained within one well written scene. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I knew that if I didn't at least try and get it all in one scene it would've made no sense. I'm glad I was able to do it, thanks for reading! :)
Review By [Yojo] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Long Night" from PrincessTai
Review:
Oh wow. That is all I can say.
It was good. Well written. It was interesting that's for sure, intriguing even.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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