Review of chapter "Pretty in Purple" from
OddshotReview:
I Dream Of Cordy by amusewithaview : I love this 1 shot story but if you can update it I think it could become a great story also you said I may or may not continue this, she'd hae to be found by someone military but what if Cordy's bottle was found by one of the Big Bad aka The Mayor or may be Spike or a little bad like Snyder or Harmony just a thought.
If your MUSE requires a bribe give it a few cookies , so I and other have more of this story to read soon.
Review By [
Oddshot] • Date [13 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pretty in Purple" from
HMaxMariusReview:
Well, I know it has been years since this was written... but you did pose the question...
Why not Xander? after-all he was 'Soldier Boy' for Halloween... and can you imagine Cordy's reaction to Xan-Man having her at his beck and call?
Edit: That would be part of what would make it interesting, seeing Xander attempting to rise above his base instincts and occasionally failing. Having Buffy, Willow and Giles grasp the implications and trying to help Xander keep things above board. How might some of the later things that happen play out if Xander could make wishes... what sort of consequences might those wishes have? Remember, with all the snarking and professions of deep, undying hatred, Xander really does care about Cordy, even before they fell into lust. He wouldn't intentionally hurt her (wish her naked intentionally)... though he might by accident.
Comments from author:
I can, actually, and the potential implications made me uncomfortable. Cordy and Xander were always at their best when they snarked at each other - when neither could really establish authority over the other. Yes, she ruled the school, but Xander never fully subscribed to her "reign" and when it came to Scooby things he was more knowledgeable/useful: they were equals.
Xander, CANON Xander, has shown himself to...not always think things through, especially when emotionally involved. He's also a teenage boy. I just wasn't comfortable with the idea of giving him that much power over Cordy.
Review By [
HMaxMarius] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pretty in Purple" from
JonakhensuReview:
I think this demands a sequel. Who gets to be Cordy's Master? Somehow, the only three men I can see not beng total bastards about it are Oz, Giles, and Xander. I vote for Xander, as it'll cause the most havac with the lowest body count.
Review By [
Jonakhensu] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pretty in Purple" from
CutiepieReview:
I'm just going to chant and hope your muse gets the hint: more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . . more, more, more, more, more . . . . .
Comments from author:
*Glares at you.*
*Chanting continues.*
*Pulls outs CD player, pops in Queen. Ignores you to the blissful sounds of 'Bohemian Rhapsody.'*
*Chanting continues.*
*Looks up, sighs...*
Alright, alright, maybe later!
Danke for the AMUSE-ing review.
Review By [
Cutiepie] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Not Rated