Okay, i got a question for you. Because this is a really promising story with a great start, so I want to know: are you gonna continuum this? I really hope so =)
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Not Rated
I am beginning to wonder if you have died cause you have an amazing story and it took you a year to put out one new chapter. please update or at least show you are not dead by saying something.
Review By [sunraye] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great start to a story series. The idea of the 'Daler Grapevine and them being recruited for "eyes open, mouths shut" posts is very intriguing. But the people who were aware are only a small portion of Sunnydale residents and former residents. What happens those who stubbornly deny the reality in their conscious minds, while sub-consciously following the rules?
I would like to see more of this series. Maybe a nice 400k-word novel? :-)
By the way, If I Recall Correctly, the Initiative took 100% casualties, 40% fatalities. Casualties include Wounded, Missing, and Killed in Action. (Wounded includes scratches where you have to get an official band-aid.)
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]