Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Greywizard
Calling a character you created yourself Buffy doesn't really make her Buffy. You could possibly had made the reader believe it could be the same person if you had spent some time describing how canon Buffy had been lost or kidnapped and had been slowly tempted and transformed by the Cenobites into the character you wrote about.
As it is, all this story does is show how you had some canon characters you really didn't like very much meet up with the Cenobites and lose. Meh.
Comments from author:
Not the greatest review I have ever gotten but thanks for the honesty.
Review By [Greywizard
] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from PATM
So Buffy the vamp is now a cenobite?. I loved the first movie and I sort of appreciated the philosophy behind Pin Heads
deal and was a little disappointed that the lead character was caught up in the mother in law hating (she WAS a bitch
after all). I liked that Buffy wasn't averse here and she was daddy's girl after all.
Review By [PATM
] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated