Such a great fic. I really hope that you come back to finish it one day.

I realize it's been a while, but I have enjoyed this story immensely. You have a great plot going and you've captured the characters really well.

I hope you have more planned and eventually, no matter how long it may take, plan on completing this story.

I have reread the story again and I really hope that you one day gets inspired update it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Arrows, Keys, and Bats...

Haiku dirge:

A shame the story's dead
Be nice to see where it led
Your muse—has it fled
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Man, I know real life comes from the dog pound, but I hope you have a few chapters more, some day.

Cr@p?!? Where did you get that idea?!?

I'm not a comic reader or anything like that, but you've researched so well, I don't need to be! And that's a good thing!

Of course the story is amazing anyway. . But I wanted to add that in too!

Can't wait for the next piece!

Great story so far. Would really love to see it continued.

I like this story. It rocks.

I love this story! Are you ever going to continue?! You are almost to the end of season 7, don't quit now!!!

Hey, am glad you updated, this chapter was short, but it was good, can't wait for the next chapter.

I have just reread this story and I hope you get inspired to add more chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny some Tuna Sandwich::

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There are 350 varieties of shark,
not counting loan and pool.
- L. M. Boyd
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*wilts* Sigh, drake huh?

"Also, What do you all think Dawn's superhero name should be? Cos I'm drawing blanks"
Jadefire; Eos; Gatekeeper; It's all far to late, i know, but still fun to throw these out there. Or somthing with green, you've got green arrow and green lantern, why not green witch or somthing... hmm that doesn't sound right... Veridian dream?

A) Bart Allen 3
B) Tim Drake 10
C) No one 2
D) Random undecided 2
Ahh... far too late I know, but I hope you didn't decide on Tim drake, the kid has no style an not much better sence of humor. while I can't honestly imagine bart likeing her he'd be a much better choice. My personal vote would be for an unknown if you were going for strait and Raven of the titans if you were interested in a bi or lesbian Dawn Theough just making them friends would be quite enough for useful amusment. Think about it, both of them created both of them meant to end their respective worlds both trying desperatly to escape or forget their pasts , both god level potential and both magic based in need of massive control. Either they'd be fast friends or they'd hate eachother. Either way it'd be facinating.

Why'd you have to switch off the moniters though? this was somthing dawn could have been an immediate help with.

good job! it took me forever to finish this story but it was worth it. :)) i especially love all the bruce and dawn moments. :)) will you still be updating? i really hope you do. :D

EXCELLENT bit of work you've got here, I have to admit; VERY well-written, to say the least.

True, continuity-wise it's a bit confusing from the "Buffyverse" perspective- how's Angel suddenly in charge of Wolfram & Hart when no reference has been made to him solving the Jasmine crisis or something like that?-, but Dawn's new life as a teen superhero is certainly interesting reading.

If nothing else, the connection between her and the Amazons- and, from there, the link between the Key and the Slayers- was certainly original...

Plus, her relationship with Robin's developing well so far; I look forward to seeing where it goes in the future.

Of course, right now my main question about this story's plot is simple; will the Scoobies still throw Buffy out, or will she- aided by the backing of Batman and Green Arrow- manage to convince them to go through with her plan?

Guess we'll just have to wait and see...

Keep up the good work; I DEFINITELY want to see how things go from here on in!

Heh. Good stuff. Keep it up.