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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MichelleJoyceAlison
Review:
This is very intriguing... it's a shame that you haven't written more about this story? What is with the ring? Is the bishop controlling Buffy w/ it? It should be the other way round... Buffy should be driving out the Roman invaders...
Review By [MichelleJoyceAlison] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GypsyWitch
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All your work is so wonderfully written, but this is one of my all time favorites! I love all the subtle details you have in the story that reference things just outside the reader's grasp (and leave it up to our imaginations) but are apparent to the characters in the story. Like the line about Buffy being the one not able to talk to the soldiers; does she not speak Latin? Did the Bishop cut her tongue out? Is she under a spell that forces her to keep silent?

And speaking of spells, another thing I loved was how it's not entirely clear what is going on between Buffy and the Bishop. Is the Bishop using magic to enslave Buffy? That could be why he was stroking his ring when answering Arthur. Maybe it's a magical ring and he's using it to control Buffy. Which could be part of the reason the Christian narrator hates the Bishop so much: a supposed man of God using magic, and black magic at that. Some of the comments the legionnaire made could fit that scenario. And why the hell else would Buffy stick around?

I would so love to read a sequel or some kind of epilogue to this, maybe have the soldiers and Sarmatians turn on the Bishop and his minions later on. I bet Arthur would help free Buffy. That was *another* cool little detail. The byplay between Arthur and the other Romans regarding the 'holy man.' OK, I'll stop ranting now. Again, amazing job, thanks for sharing!!!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fran
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I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
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Had no idea what in the world was going on in this fic in terms of context since I only once watched the 'King Arthur' (2004) movie and didn't get drawn into it all that much, but loved the writing anyway. The scenes and characterizations were vivid as always. Thanks for writing this fic.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amai
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Excellent. I'm image some barbarian (name beginning with C?) does get the Bishops head.
Review By [Amai] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Intriguing, I hope you post more of this some day.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tygrus
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Wonderful story. I mus say that you are a tease for all of the shorts you put out there, no past or future. And just a quick note, you mention her riding bareback and then mention her saddle. You might want to do something about that.

Keep writing.
Review By [Tygrus] • Date [19 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
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Couldn't quite figure out whose perspective this was from, but I enjoyed it all the same. Would love to see more of this world/verse/story, or more of some of your other stuff.

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rapunzel
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You are one crazy woman. How many ideas are banging around in that head of yours? Is this based on the movie of King Arthur with Clive Owen? I have not seen it, so I'm not familiar with all the characters. This story holds a lot of mystery for me, but it is excellent and compelling. Yet another beautiful piece of work!
Review By [rapunzel] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gloriana
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Yet another wonderful one-shot and yet another story you could add to if you so wished. You have a gift for this.
Review By [Gloriana] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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