Interesting start- although I admit you won points originally for keeping Elizabeth; I always liked her as a character- leading into a VERY interesting story with an intriguing look at the character dynamics.

Dawn’s origins in this timeline might be a particular question-mark- even if the incident with the Stargate made it clear that something strange happened, that doesn’t explicitly answer why she’s ‘now’ John’s sister rather than Buffy’s-, but with the discovery of the Key’s connection to the development of ZPMs- coupled with the presence of Riley at least confirming that the Stargates exist in the Buffyverse rather than Dawn having jumped dimensions somehow-, I’m forming a pretty good idea about what’s happening here that I hope will be explored in more depth in future...

You ARE going to continue this story, right?

as i read this i was going 'its spike, it has to be spike!' then the vman came through and it seemed i was right but the clothes didnt sound spikey at all! so now a dead body is talking and that sure as hell sounds spikey and i just... i wanted you to know how *into* the story i was getting.

Absolutely superb. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.

//“How the bloody devil should I know?”//

HAHAHALOLLOLLOLLOLROFLROFLROFLROFL

//“Well, I certainly wish someone could explain it to me,” Elizabeth said ruefully.
“It's about time!” came an excited voice from the control area, just outside of Elizabeth's office.
She tried to peer over Ronon’s shoulder and into the gateroom. “Freyka? Is something the matter?”
“Wish granted!”//

What type of Vengeance Demon is she?

So I guess Spike remembers Dawn as Buffy's sister? Won't that be confusing :)
I wonder if Riley will be all friendly with Spike (because he helped Buffy out) or if he will be locking him up and throwing away the key (because - Hey, Vampire!)
I'd like to see Riley try to bluff his way out of this for a few days but it looks like he will be pulling out his codes all too soon.
And Dawn will not be happy!

Oh please, please, please update. I decided to re-read the story again and now I remember how good it is. You're leaving us all in suspense.

OMG! You can't end it there! I need more, I can not WAIT for Riley to show up in the gate room and see his old pal, Hostile 17, or for Dawn to see Spike again. Again..GAH! I need more!

I wonder if Spike will be able to go into the sun in the Pegasus Galaxy?

This story is absolutely fantastic, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Great story. Keep up the good work.

A YEAR!?!? You've left this story for A YEAR?

I can live with the guy / guy stuff, you alluded to it in the first chapter (though you might not have even realized it back then) but really, a YEAR? I want to see how the SGA team deals with William the Bloody Awful Poet AKA Spike the Vampire, Dawn being The Key / The Source, the fact that Dawn can charge ZPMs with her MIND (sort of) and all the supernatural freakiness that comes with it!

Return to this story! The SGC fanboy within me demands it!!

You really can't leave the story hanging there. That out of the way, I'm highly enjoying this, it's an interesting way in which to merge the two universes, though I'm curious to see how/why exactly Dawn got thrown into the SG world. Keep up the great work.

hey where are you? You can not leave us hanging like that! Come back, please!

This is wonderful. I do hope you continue. This is such a cliffhanger.
I really want to see the slash version too!

Wow! Wow wow wow! What an awesome story! You succeeded in snatching my attention, and holding it for all 15 chapters. I almost cried when I saw the 'The End?' sign.
You've written a wonderfully rich story. I enjoyed how you wrote your characters, and how you write enough for us to understand what's happening, but you leave enough mystery so that we don't know the whole plot.
I hope you will update again (it's been 14 months). Thank you for sharing your imagination and written work with us.

Just re-read your story again. Wow. It is so great. I love that Alraven is actually Riley undercover. I'm intrigued by what Tara's conversation with Dawn might mean for Dawn's place in the world. I'm curious about Ronon's Wraith-sense. I've truly enjoyed your merging of the worlds. I'm looking forward to where you take us next!

loving it. more please!
is it spike? brown jacket? giles maybe? hmmmm. dont keep me in suspense.