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Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Great story! And that last piece was SO very hilarious!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have to say, this is my favorite work, because it was my first serious attempt at fic.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from Xayian
Review:
I wasn't sure about the whole idea of the story b/c, ya know, sometimes crossovers don't always jive, but I'm glad I took time read this.
Nicely done, doll! :D
Comments from author:
Well, damn.

/blush

Thanks.

:)
Review By [Xayian] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from calikocat
Review:
Wonderful fic! The Jonas/Dawn pairing rocked, and I had to squee at the mentioning of two things. 1) Valrico because I lived there for a year; and 2) Dragon Ball, I join you in your geekiness.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked.

I lived in Valrico for a while too, live in the area still, and I love dropping in odd local stuff. :)

Dragon Ball is awesome!!! Share the geek!!
Review By [calikocat] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from Ansku
Review:
Lovely :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from callhervera
Review:
I just finished reading this after reading the whole thing today and must say I really enjoyed it. I haven't read much Dawn and I've never read any Jonas, so this story has really opened my eyes to some new characters to read fanfic on. You did a great job with them too and I think that you got Jonas' voice down especially well. I agree with what some others have said about the second half becoming a little rushed, but I can understand how that can happen sometimes as a writer. The ending was very humorous and I'm looking forward to going and reading the sequels now!!

Overall, it was fantastic!
Review By [callhervera] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from KiraAlexia
Review:
Great story.
Review By [KiraAlexia] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I really enjoyed this.

I liked your idea of stretching out the storyline but, possibly because I read it all in one sitting and not as the chapters came out, it didn't really feel like that much time was passing.

Looking foreward to reading the rest of this series!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. I love reviews. :)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from anouk
Review:
While I'm delighted you had both Cassie and Jon join the cast alongside Jonas (three great characters not featuring often enough in fanfics) I do notice you rushed your story somewhat near the ending. The beginning is nice and detailed, but then at some point things start to move very fast and not necessarily make sense to me - like Jon and Cassie spilling all the secrets. While Jon is different than Jack at this point he still has more memories in common with Jack than not, and need for SGC to stay secret is pretty much ingrained in him, I think. While you do try to explain it in the next story it seems a bit forced in a way, more tell than show.
Comments from author:
I agree lol. Yeah I made a point of not having Jon or Jonas tell about the Stargate due to the NDA and stuff, but Jon should have fought it a bit more. And I did rush the ending a bit. Not intentionally, but I was just writing it as it came to me and I got the end all at once. That and I'm not really good with the actiony bits. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [anouk] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from Kirallie
Review:
Glad Jonas took it well. Would the SGC say anything or not? After all he is human only from another planet so the kid would be fully human.
Comments from author:
I'm not really sure to be honest. For the purposes of my story I'm saying that they don't. As far as anyone else, that's a different story.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from StephanieClare
Review:
I really loved this story.. and now i'm desperate for you to continue the series... i was laughing so hard at the end there that i cried.... I could really picture both Daniel and Jonas's face... i like how youve left the story open for more.. human spike and vi living in the cottage nearby will bring lots of adventures.. theres so much you can do with vi
Review By [StephanieClare] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from link
Review:
Ooh, Dragon ball. One of the first manga that introduce me to the wonderful world of Japanese manga. Brings back good memories. Did you have that sense of accomplishment since you are now finished the fic? I'm glad you decided to end it on the funny side since the previous chapter are so angst-ey. Looking forward to the rest of the series!
Comments from author:
Yes, great sense of accomplishment here. Also love the DB and DBZ, not so much with the GT, but love anime and it was my first. :)
Review By [link] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hi. Liked your story. Wasn't exactly sure about what the joke was, but it did appear that the women were coming on to Daniel, and Dawn implying that Daniel was the father of her baby. Maybe a little more exposition or description. Other than freaking out Daniel, I wasn't sure if there wasn't another layer to the "joke."

Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Actually it was Jon they were all over. And freaking out Daniel was a side benefit to screwing with Jon. They all know who Jon is, and Cassie knows Daniel, so what would freak out Jon more than Daniel thinking he has an under 25 harem. Hope that clears it up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from RevDorothyL
Review:
VERY satisfying!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from wargear
Review:
Brilliant. Just brilliant.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [wargear] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue and Such" from purrfus
Review:
Ah for the bad old days when all you could win was kittens.

Fun ending. Can't wait for the next in the series.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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