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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from greysh
Review:
Lovely fic!
Review By [greysh] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from spk
Review:
WOW! Amazing characterizations. Great job handling the grieving process. Really enjoyed this. I definitely hope that one day you'll come back to this and give us the sequel. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from Tamda
Review:
Hot damn.

I am reccing this. Hot diggedy dog DAMN. It's... sad... almost, you don't get the fallout of the dead, you get the brief moment of the after affects, then nothing. Very cool and makes me drool at all the fallout the sequel will have.

I am such a masochist... or is that sadist? I want to see Xan in the SGC, see what Wills gets into, see the emotional rocks and fly by night ship of Jack/Daniel dancing in the waves...

I want to see what Willow channels everything she can't let herself be burried under into...

And gods, goddesses and all the little snakies and squids in the universe help the government if the Initiative is back up and running...

Cause Willow will smite it like the angry fist of god if they're messing with the new baby slayers...
Comments from author:
Wow thank you!! What an excellent Review! Now I really got to get it into gear and finish the sequel :D

I think I've plotted out a very good main story line for the sequel, I'm rather excited about it, just never seemed to have the time to finish it. You'll absolutely get to see the Sunnydale Trio at the SGC, and as the teaser suggests on the main story, this story WILL begin shortly after the last one ended so hopefully it will bring in all the elements you are looking for plus some you will hopefully be pleasantly surprised to see as well.

Being a huge fan of both shows I will endeavor to do my best (and worst muhahaha) to both fandoms.

Thank you again for the review!!
Review By [Tamda] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from stasa
Review:
A truly nice and exciting story and a wonderful intro for, what I'm guessing will be, a story you simply can't put down... I'm really looking forward to a sequel...
Review By [stasa] • Date [27 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from Ansku
Review:
Lovely story and an intriguing teaser of the sequel, I hope you are still working on that :)
Comments from author:
I am! Things got hectic and I had to stop but I am getting back on the road with it soon!
Review By [Ansku] • Date [9 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapters One and Two" from Dana
Review:
Why is this categorized as Gen and Slash? It can't be both.
Comments from author:
When I was placing it in the categories, it was asking for who it was centered around, and it isn't centered around any specific person, more like a group of people, so it's in that 'general characters' category with slash as a sub category.
Review By [Dana] • Date [27 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from Xanateria
Review:
I loved this story. It was well plotted, and paced and complex enough to be interesting without being confusing. And the Mac/Ripper connection was so well done that I was squeeeeing in places.

As far as the reviews that say too much slash, I say there is no such thing, bring on the slashy goodness in the sequel. And speaking of the sequel, any ideas on when it will be posted at all?

Thanks for sharing a great read.
Comments from author:
Thank you!! I am glad to hear about the plot and pace, I had issues with pace at parts but by the end hoped I worked out the kinks well enough. Squeeeee away, I know I did LOL.

Slash is a good thing... I agree. Originally this was to be a much higher rated story but in the end it came out 'tame'. Wonder how the sequel will come out :D

As for the sequel, I started writing it then lost what I wrote and then got busy with the holidays and new year (and painting! My gosh I got two paintings done!) I should be back on track shortly though I really have no set date for when it will come out. Depends on my muse and how it guides me. I can promise only this, I will have restarted it before February 1st :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!
Review By [Xanateria] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from manic
Review:
I adored this. I really, really hope you are able to continue with the story.
Comments from author:
I do plan to continue it and I am so glad to hear you liked it! :)
Review By [manic] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from Severusslave
Review:
Oh, this was awesome! And I am so happy that you plan to continue writing in the 'verse. :D
Comments from author:
Thank you!! :) Comments like this keep me writing!
Review By [Severusslave] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from Obsidian
Review:
A good story, thanks.
Comments from author:
You're welcome and thank you too!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And I'll try.
Review By [APS] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters One and Two" from MinaLynn
Review:
Words, I need words! Oh wow it’s here! Yay. You know I was just thinking about this story the other day (and you). I’m so glad to see it in print! You did a wonderful job. I never even considered using Jack’s cabin that was a great idea. And what you used to cause Daniel to flip out—that’s just GREAT! Seriously you did a great job on this. As soon as I saw your email I totally skived off work yesterday to read this. I’m going to have to read it again! Hopefully I can give you some more coherent feedback after I do another read through. Thanks again so much for writing this!
Comments from author:
You are very welcome :) It was a great Plot Bunny you thought of and it's true I could never have done this without you (cause I'd never have thought of it myself). I'm sorry it took so LONG to write it, but mom's finally getting better and my time is coming back to be my own. I'm very glad that you liked it and can't wait to hear your fuller review. Since I wrote it for you I am most excited to hear what you think. Enjoy :)
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool. I like it.

Do More!!!
Comments from author:
Will do! :)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen through Epilogue" from fanfictionfanatic
Review:
I loved it. I really enjoyed the "Mac"/"Ripper" connection. Great job buidling a believable relationship between the two. Also really good job highlighting the friendship between Xander and Willow. I loved the explanation she gave Xander about what she had told Daniel to bring him back and Xander's reaction. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I really enjoyed exploring the Mac/Ripper situation so I am glad to hear that you liked it too! I really wanted it to seem possible (well as possible as turning two cannon straight guys gay can be ;p). And with only the three Scoobies left I felt it was important to show how much they really cared for each other, and to me when Xander talked Darth Willow down in that episode it was the ultimate show of love and trust. I know I'll never forget it and I thought it deserved mentioning here now that they have lost everything but each other. I am excited to hear that you loved it because it means I achieved my goal for writing it :)
Review By [fanfictionfanatic] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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