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Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from Ansku
Review:
Awesome :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Ansku] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from Elenea
Review:
That was just priceless! Gibbs still on the phone... That's gotta be embarresing. And extremely hot to!
Comments from author:
I actually wrote the part with Gibbs on the phone first. :-)

Glad you liked!
Review By [Elenea] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from Elleria
Review:
Love this so much.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from neverwill
Review:
This was pretty hot. I loved how Gibbs was still on the phone and reminded Tony his ass belonged to him first. You could make them into a trio - maybe Xander & Tony keep involving Gibbs on the edges of a lot of their encounters and either Gibbs finally snaps and claims them both, or they just decide to jump him one day after one too many suggestive remarks from him.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

I'm not sure I'll have Gibbs get any more involved than just the interupptions, but the interuptions can be fun. Maybe I'll do an AU story to my verse for this fic where he does get involved. Hmmm...

But, yes, Tony's ass belongs to Gibbs before anyone else. Xander just has to learn to live with it. :-)
Review By [neverwill] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from mithrilandtj
Review:
ROFLMAO!!!
Comments from author:
:-)

I tried and succeeded evidently.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from Alterian
Review:
Wanted to let you know that I read it, and I really liked it!
You did a great job! Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feed back!
Review By [Alterian] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Squeee!!!! Yay for one of many more to come finished Slash Me Twice fics! I can't tell you how very happy I am that you got this finished and at how the finished version came together!!

On to my review, which I will probably shamelessly copy all over creation :) Yay review love!!

The voices of Xander and Tony are just spot on. You take the characters that are both arguably completely heterosexual on their perspective shows, and make them into comfortable, at ease, homosexual characters. There is nothing outlandish or over the top about them. They are just Xander and Tony, who happen to be gay and so totally doing one another! :)

I love the familiar ease that you have Xander and Tony share with one another. As characters they compliment one another quite well and you did a great job of displaying that. Even though we, the readers, are dropped into the story it isn't abrupt and awkward because you do a wonderful job of showing the established relationship and how comfortable they are with one another. I love it - just love it!!

The porn - oh Kayla - you did such a wonderful with the yummy porn. Seriously, that was some hot, hot, hot porn! Panty-combusting for sure!

The ending with Gibbs on the phone was spot on. You had Xander included, but Tony and Gibbs were just right. Their dynamic didn't waver in the slightest.

I really am just truly in love with this series that you've started and am looking forward to more adventures of Xander and Tony (and Gibbs).

And in conclusion, I shall never be able to look at Skittles or Lucky Charms the same way! :)
Comments from author:
Yay for review love!!

I'm so glad the sex worked. I was worried. Very worried. :-)

My goal was to keep Tony and Xander themselves. They wouldn't be the boys I love if they weren't themselves. Which was probably why I had to have Gibbs make an appearance. Tony isn't Tony without Gibbs around.

I really want some Skittles and Lucky Charms now. ;-)
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from DeeRose
Review:
Ohh, that so needs a sequel. Good voices, and the call at the end, priceless.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've got a few more fics planned for some of the other prompts that tie into this one.

The phone call was one of the first parts I wrote of the fic. Couldn't not have Tony talking with the boss. :-)

Glad you liked it!
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from purrfus
Review:
Lucky Charms and Skittles. Now that you've brought it to my attention it seems like such an obvious pairing.

Congratulations on your firsts. The characters and the sex were really well done. The phone bit at the end seemed so in character - I could really see it happening.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

The Lucky Charms came first (no pun intended...) and that was all that was going to be used. Then I realized that Tony would not share his marshmallows with Xander no matter how much he is in love with the boy... So Xander got the left over Skittles as that was the only other rainbow food I could think of.

The phone part was my favorite part to write. I just knew I had to get Gibbs in the fic somehow and that seemed the best way to do it. Glad you feel that it was in character, cause character was what worried me the most... well, that, and actually writing sex scenes...
Review By [purrfus] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hearts, Stars and Horseshoes..." from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
I will never look at a bowl of Lucky Charms the same. ;)
Comments from author:
It almost makes me want to go out and buy some Lucky Charms tonight... except it's raining...
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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