Okay, now your starting to get a bit strange with the ending of this ficlet. How long has it been since you last slept?
The tower scene was touching, but Dawn sounded more like she did in season 7 and not like the young girl in season 5. I wish the series had ended at the end of this season before it jumped the shark the way it did.
Thanks for posting it. Chris Patton
Comments from author:
Oh, I've ALWAYS been strange - just ask my family. ;-)
Dawns dialogue is pretty much taken verbatim from the episode transcript.
You're welcome.
Review By [Schiavona] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Not Rated
It took me a moment to figure out where the "Pretender" cross came in. I have never actually seen any Stargate Atlantis, so I was assuming the "Jarod" mentioned was part of that show . . . until it finally dawned on me.
This is interesting, and I hope that you can manage a bit more of it. Not at the expense of the other stories of yours that I'm hooked on, but . . . you know what I mean.
Comments from author:
I have no plans at the moment to continue this, but that could change depending on my muses' mood. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Not Rated
I would love to read more of this one. There just aren't enough BtVS crosses with the Pretender. Of course you are missing Ms Parker, who was one of the best reasons to watch the show. Lol!
Comments from author:
True, Miss Parker hasn't show up YET! ;-)
Do you really think she'd let a little thing like a couple million light years distance interfere with her search, though? ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Sometime in the future. I have no real plans for continuing this at the moment, but if someone else is interested in picking this up, feel free to do so. Just let me know you're doing it, okay?
Review By [Graycalls] • Date [24 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]