Review of chapter "Chapter One" from irialonso
Are you sure that this is your first!
That was beautifully written
You could probably be a great writer
Comments from author:
Thank you for being my first review. What my readers think means a lot to me, and nobody has said something that nice about my writing before.
Review By [irialonso
] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]