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Review of chapter "Chapter 28 Gun Toting Xander and Dean" from FiveOfFive
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24.) Awww, thanks sweetie! You’re the best :-)

I love my over protective Dean, whoever hurt his baby brother’s going to regret it… if he lives long enough to get the chance. I really like the progression from unconscious Xander to awake and worried that Dean’s gone off the deep end Xander. Of course, nothing can top Dean’s pissed bad-ass holding a gun face *swoons*

25.) The first one’s definitely better. And I love it!

Poor Dean looks so scared that Xander’s been hurt and it’s all his fault :-( I love bloody Xander, I’m sorry you can’t find more of his damaged goods. Like you I remember him getting his ass handed to him on several occasions :-)

26.) For some reason this picture made me think that the boys were on a hunt and Xander got shrunk by a hoodoo spell gone wrong or something :-) He’s all freaked in the back seat, Sammy’s trying to figure out how to turn him back; and Dean’s contemplating how best to tease Xander (because you know he’s not going to let an opportunity like this pass by.)

27.) I’m thinking maybe a boardwalk by a beach… beautiful girl in a bikini… Dean’s in heaven, and Xander can’t stop drooling. Also, Sammy’s inside with his nose in a book totally disgusted with his gene pool.

28.) OK, side note, I love the backgrounds! The sky and the lightning are SO pretty! *Is girly and a dorkchop*

I imagine that the first one is after Xander’s been training for a while, he looks very suave and in control (Dean of course looks like a bad-ass son of a bitch with a gun… *swoon*)

The lightning picture is maybe his first or second hunt, Dean’s all business of course, but poor Xander looks freaked as all get out! Of course scary lightning might have something to do with that :-)

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! For my Protective Dean Pics! They are wonderful, and so are you, keep ‘em coming babe, you ROCK :-)
Comments from author:
Your very welcome!!!! I'm happy that you liked them!!!!

I love all my Deans!!! Over protective Dean...Smart Ass Dean....Kick Ass Dean....Angsty Dean....Happy Dean....Angry Dean......need I say more? Seriously, I could go all day thinking and typing about loving Dean Winchester!! Lol! :)

It was soo frustrating b/c I ended up looking through almost every episode in the ScreenCap Paradise site, and it was VERY HARD to find anything!!!!!!! Either he didn't bleed in the episodes where he was injured, or whoever captured the scenes didn't get them uploaded. :( I'll probably try to shrink the pics more. On my software, the pics aren't as big as on this site and the wounds don't look as fake. I'll have to figure out how to do it, since the pics were on the lowest setting I found so far.


I'll definitely have to redo the car picture. But later..as I'm feeling very procrastinatingly (that's not a word I don't think, but I don't want to look and see).

I like your version too :) But I think Sam would also be sneaking a peak now and again though. Sammy isn't as innocent as he appears. After all, Dean DID catch him watching that naughty movie in season 2. And then he had that dream about that bitch Belle.


I like the backgrounds too. :) It's fun to mess around finding different backgrounds.


I have several angsty pics with John as well. I think about five or more. :) I wasn't sure if I should post them yet since it might make people want to read the 'Dead Man's Blood' episode fic. After all, I'm only a third way into the second story, and 'DMB" is the FOURTH. But if people really want to see them, I may cave. :)
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 23 Protective Dean" from FiveOfFive
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21. Boys, fire, all so pretty, don’t know what to love! I especially like the second one, really good close-up shots; and the third one; I love how it looks like the fire’s glow is reflected on their faces. Really well done, very nice :-)

22. I don’t know why but the look on the Winchester’s faces makes me think that, John has done something stupid/reckless/thoughtless/high-handed, and Sam has come down on the opposing side of it, Xander has tentatively chosen Sam and Dean’s conflicted between his loyalty to his father and his devotion to his brothers. Not to mention his own mind which he never seems to follow.
Side issue, why is John the only one that gets to be wet? Perhaps Dean, Sam, and Xander would like to cool off as well. Think about it :-)

23. So pretty *No brain! Stop being shallow* Pretty boys *Oh crap, I think we’ve lost her*

I don’t know what it is about protective Dean that just makes me want to… jump him. But in answer to your question, yes you captured it very well, and I wouldn’t mind seeing more of it. Maybe a bleeding baby brother and a gun-wielding Dean? I like the way Xander is hunched over behind him, kind of like he’s curling in on himself after a punch or something. I also like the word bubble, I don’t think it was necessary to convey what you were trying to say with the pic, but it was still a nice addition.

Keep the images of hot boys coming, and I’ll try to do better about reviewing in a timely fashion :-D
Comments from author:
Thank you soooo much!!!!!! I love working with the fire, and the boys!!!!! Because all the boys, as well as the fire is sooooo pretty, and HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Even my drool can't put out their hotness!
I liked the second on best too. I was worried that it would be too grainy. A lot of pics look fine on my laptop, but look bad on a bigger screen (Someone said it was really bad on my 'A Family For All pics, so I've been worried that all of the ones I've done are like that).


That would go with the fourth in the series 'Dead Man's Blood' then. :)

On the side issues lol, I guess I didn't see any good pics with the boys being wet? They are too hot remain wet for long?


I know what you mean about protective Dean. Heck, then there's Angsty Dean, Smart-ass Dean, Kick-ass Dean................................... I'm sorry, where was I?


I'm soo happy I captured it!! I was a bit worried. When I look at a picture, I really try to LOOK at it. Sometimes trying to picture a scene or something to go along with it.

I actually thought about that!!!!!!!! I'm planning on looking through Screencap Paradise for bleeding Xander pics as well as gun weilding Dean!!!!!!! I was going to do it before, but I haven't got the chance yet!

For me, the bubble was a little redundant as well, but in case I nhadn't captured it without the added help, I did it anyway. That and it was kind of fun!

I already have some in mind (the one/s we were thinking about with bloody Xan, and more with John). :)

I just have to do them, get back to trying to blow up my writer's block so I can finish my next chapter, read and review your story (I have it short cutted to my desktop so I can read it tommorrow :) ),
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch. 20 More Lightening" from FiveOfFive
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17&18 Ooh, I read this, I really liked it! It was all angsty and sad but I wanted them to resolve their issues and be a happy family again… when Dean’s a sad angst-muffin I want to cry :-(

19. “Either they're out for a night of fun, or they're strolling the night for some action”
Why can’t it be both? Also, I like that the more time Xander spends with his brothers the better dressed he is. Even though his shirt is a bit shiny and spotted, it doesn’t clash, and it’s kinda suave. He no longer dresses in dead clown pustules… I am elated and yet sad.

20. It looks like the lightning is reflected in Xander’s eyes, which makes Dean and Sam look very concerned. Sam of course is overtly worried, with his hunched over posture and sad puppy face. Dean’s worry is more contained, it’s in the eyes, freaked out, what the hell is going on with my baby brother eyes… he gets those eyes a lot.
Comments from author:
I totally need to read 'Beer Bad' again, it has been too long!


It totally is both. Of course some of the action they face IS fun!!!!! I tried to take the shinyness away, but it refused. So I pretend it's kinda leather like. :)


Again, sorry for freaking you out w/ Xander's eyes. I didn't mean to!!!!!!
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 16 Later" from FiveOfFive
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14. I think I like the first one best. I like Dean and Sam alert and looking out the window while Willow’s a bit scared and Xander’s beside her worried but protecting.

15. *Squeee* They match! Xander and Willow MATCH! There is no way in hell that Dean will ever let him live that down :-) Of course Dean and Sammy are coordinated too, but it’s not that hard to coordinate when you only wear varying shades of blacks, grays, and blues. *Humph* I’m getting those two boys dead clown t-shirts…

16. *Snigger* Sorry, it’s a cool pic, but the demon cloud rising behind them makes it look like Willow has a feather hat on. Kind of like a Vegas Showgirl, *whisper* don’t tell Dean I said that, his mind will go to the dirty place.

Have you written this yet? If not, could you? It looks like a great story; I’m interested to know where you’ll go with it.
Comments from author:
I like the first one best too. :) It was the third one I did, so it's good that I liked the Xander/Willlow part of the picture to experiment with. That's definatly the header! I already got the header ready on PhotoBucket. And that's the vibe I was going for in that pic, so go me! :) After all, he's still new, so I had to have Xander look at least a little concerned.

I have the prolauge, and part of the first chapter done on 'Text Message From Hell'. It was origionally going to be the second story in the series, but the 'job' I had the boys coming from made me go "That would be a good story to have on it's own!" So now 'TMFH' will be the third in the series.


I matched them on purpose!! :) I couldn't help it when I saw the pics with wearing almost the same thing! :) I HAD to put them together! Maybe she got it for his birthday, and she gives it to him when she sees them in 'TMFH". And Dean COULD give him crap over the 'Tree Girl' totally crushing on his practically unaware baby brother!! And maybe after meeting the brothers, Willow could get a crush on Sam too, since they have that whole really smart- computer hacking thing going for them.......that could be funny cause Dean would sooo make fun of Sam, cause Sam wouldn't know how to handle it!! Hee Sorry for the babble! I just pictured Sammy's face! :)


I didn't even notice that! I think it was a palm tree, but on looking at it after your review, it DOES sort of resemble one of those show girl hats. It also reminds me of those feathers on pimp hats!
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 13 A Different Destiny Two" from FiveOfFive
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9. *Gasp* I love Distant Relations too! This ROCKS! Poor blue haired Dean looking like an old lady. Of course Sammy and Xander being pretty in pink was awfully cruel too :-)

10. Again, Xander just fits… now for the important question…. Why do they all have their hands in their pockets? It’s cool that they all do stylistically, but it causes a certain pause when I think about it more deeply.

11. I love these boys too *double sigh*

12. I haven’t read A Different Destiny, but I’m sure as hell freaked as all get out! Xander looks so intense Dean’s all worried/puzzled; and Sam looks slightly distant….
What could make my boys look like that? (I know they’re not “my boys” they belong to the world… and I’m part of the world so I take it back they are mine.)
The aura thing is cool I like their colors, so pretty *is shallow*. Except of course for Sam’s which is black! AHH! That can’t be good, can it?

13. I find Willow’s presence reassuring, Xander’s face is still freaking me out a little, but what can go wrong if Willow’s there to keep him safe? Also, she has a nice non-evil glow, which I find comforting.
Comments from author:
If I hadn't read 'Distant Relations', 'Alexander Harris Winchester' would never had been born. It was because I had been waiting for five LONG months last year for an update, that I figured I'd make my own Xander Winchester story to tide myself over. I'm always soo happy when it's updated!! *crossing fingers that there'll be another one soon!*.
I'm not really happy with the pic. It could of been better, but I had been in a hurry to get it posted to show Sierra Phoenix how much I enjoyed the story.


I have no idea why they all would have their hands in their pockets story wise, but when I saw that all three had one, I HAD to do it! :)


We can share! :)


I call them "My boys" too *Huge Grin*. In fact, when Thursday comes around, I get all happy and do a little dancee while singing : "My boys are on tonight, hee hee! My boys are on tonight Ha ha! My boys are on, my boys are on To-niight!"

It's been sooo sad that I haven't been able to see them in FOREVER!!!! Counting down the days to April 3rd!!!!!!!

In 'A Different Destiny' Dean and Xander have to stop Sam from being the head demon guy old yellow eyes wanted him for. Xander has some key related powers, which is why Xander has the whole green aura, and Sam's being dark.

I really didn't mean for the eyes to look so freaky. I didn't even notice it until you pointed it out soo many times. :)
Yeah, the pinkish glow I didn't want to clash too much with her hair. I'm glad I didn't make her look evil. I tried different shades of a couple of different colors, so I'm happy it turned out so well. :)
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 8 These boys are soooo HOT!!!" from FiveOfFive
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4&5 I like how for four and five you kind of added Xander in all unobtrusive like, as though he’s always been there, it’s just that there was a Xander blocking filter on the camera. He completely belongs in their lives, and now he is, it’s perfect.

6. Dean looks freaked! It’s cool that he’s the only one worrying yet, always trying to figure out danger before it gets to his brothers.

7. Now Dean looks pissed! I do not want angry big brother Dean after me… unless it’s in a sexual way… did I say that out loud?

8. *Singing* Burn baby burn!
I love how it looks (to me anyway) like Dean set the fire and now is all bad ass, "Come on baby bros, let's get some burgers and beer"; Xander's saying "He's the coolest big brother ever!" and Sam's like "Showoff, that was completely unnecessary"
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!!!!! I'm glad I got it to look like he belonged with the Winchesters. :)

Dean's expression was my favorite also in that pic. He does look like he's kinda freaked. I makes me want to think of something to explain the pic better. Maybe I'll write something later.


I know what you mean (on BOTH accounts!) :)

*Big grin* Burn baby burn indeed! I could totally see that being the case. He could of set it to get a Spirit, and their watching the body burning.
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 3 Mt Rushmore" from FiveOfFive
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Hey you, sorry it's taken me so long to review your Xander Winchester images *sad face* forgive me?

OK, first impressions, I like Xander with the ax but it's a little choppy; however your cutting skills were greatly improved by the second and third pics. I really liked all three boys with there arms crossed, and that Dean was standing in front of his brothers so that whatever came at them he'd take it on first (so Dean).

As for the third pic, I almost spit out my coke when I saw Xander in that shirt, it's like if a clown got smallpox and died, and someone decided to make him into a shirt, but they waited a little to long and he'd begun to decay. Shirts like that should be outlawed by the CDC and the Society for the Protection of Clowns. So basically I loved it :-)
Comments from author:
Hi-ya! :) Of COURSE I forgive you!!! How can I not, when you review soo nicely!!!!! :)

Yeah, the first one wasn't so great. It was done the second day I got my picture software. The others that I made the first day, in the first batch was worse. I might redo this one at some point. It's hard to find Xander with a weapon, so I might have to paste his face on another body later.

Yeah, when I couldn't resist making one when I saw that all three had a picture with thier arms crossed. That is pretty much why I put him in front:!
I kind of pictured a cheesy announcer saying "Demons beware: The Winchesters are here!" with the american flag waving in the background since they're as much heros as Superman, darn it!!

I made that shirt as ugly as I could without taking the entire focus away from those pretty, pretty boys! :) After all, Dean was wondering if Xander was colorblind after seeing the shirt, so it HAD to be loud!
I like the second best, b/c it looks like Dean is really not liking being there (Which goes with the story as much as the color blind inducing shirt).
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 23 Protective Dean" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good pics, i loved the ones with John in them with his boys!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I had more with thier daddy, but I lost them when my computer crashed. I'm hoping to make more with John. But everytime I go on the computer, the darn addicting Internet keeps screaming for my attention, and before you know it, I'm surfing the net!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 18" from junnights
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Hmm.... interesting:) can't wait for more:)
Comments from author:
Wait no longer, more is here! :)
Sorry it took so long, but I was working on ' A Family For All' pics, and a couple of stories as well. :)
I'm glad you liked the others, and I hope you like these. :)
Review By [junnights] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 Beer Bad" from shdwslayer
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It was everything, not just the photoshop stuff. I just did a full wipe of my computer. But luckily I have most of my things backed up on disk and downloadable things like the adobe stuff. I had a virus on it once and it wiped my shit clean. After that I made sure to back everything up just in case. So I have everything again except for some brushes and fonts that I forgot to save before the wipe.

You know when you're not in the mood to write and you try and force yourself and it comes out crap? Thats how I am right now. I'm trying to write and I know exactly what I want but it's not working, so I'll take a break for a while.

I have an idea off a wallpaper that I wanna do for my story, I just have to find the right pictures. Where do you get your pics of Xander? And I'm still working on my other one of "Text message from hell" Who are your characters in there? I know Sam, Dean, Xan (duh :) Is willow and buffy in there too?
Comments from author:
Ugh! I Hate it when THings get lost!!!!!! Just five minutes ago I replied to this, and when I pushed the 'Add Comment' button, it said those three words I HATE the most when I'm online 'Cannot Find Server'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I had a LOT to say!! And I can't remember everything I said. I know I said something about losing some pictures before b/c I forgot to save something.

Yeah, I know what you mean. It comes when it wants to come. It's rare that you can actually force yourself. What's soo frustrating , is when your ready, you don't have time to do it!!!!!!!!

I got them from "The Chosen Two". They have pics of the casts of 'Buffy', 'Angel', & 'Firefly'. "Text Message From Hell" has the Winchester brothers (including Xan of course) and Willow. The reason Willow is in it and not Buffy is b/c the boys visit Willow when they are in the same town as the 'Shrink-A-Thon 2006' conferance that Willow and her parents are at.

I can't remember what else I said, so I'll just say good luck on both the story and the art. Can't wait for updates!! :)
I'm hoping to get the last chapter of 'AHW' typed and posted late tonight, or early tomorrow.
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 Beer Bad" from shdwslayer
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OH my god, you're done? Seriously? Wow. Type it out right now! Just kidding. Thats great. I can't wait to see what you have in store.

As for me, I'm still where I was the last time. My chapter consist of the episodes 'nightmare' ending of 'benders' and 'shadow' And right now I'm only at the beginning of nightmare, but I have like 5 notebook pages back and front so I don't know how long this chap is going to be. I'll work on it right now though as soon as I get the transcripts.

So did you download the adobe photoshop? I had to do, because I had to erase everything on my computer and reinstall it, major sucky. Now I have to look for all my fonts and brushes again.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was up to almost 4 am working on the chapter that had refused to come out. I would not let myself go to sleep without getting it done!!! Since today was my day off (I'm off for four days again, but this time not in a row), I forced myself to get it written. But I totally suck at typing!!!! Add that to real life trying to butt in....... I really hope I can get it up either tommorrow, or the day after (which is when I'm off again).

Yeah, I downloaded it. :) I haven't had time to try to figure it out so I can play with it though. :( But I have a few more pics on my other software almost ready to post. And a couple of them already ready, but I don't want to post them until I start the story where Xander meets John, cause the pictures are with him.

THat sucks that you had to erase everything!!!!!!! Is it just the stuff in that software file, or EVERYTHING-everything. I would scream, then cry if I had to to erase EVERYTHING on MY computer. Especially all the pics (ones I've made, ones I downloaded, and ones from my camera)!!!!!!!
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 18" from cflat
Review:
These are getting better as you go on.
Comments from author:
Thank you :). Especailly coming from you, since yours is soo cool. :)
Review By [cflat] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 Beer Bad" from shdwslayer
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Ooh, I love it and I love that story. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks :), I do too. I need to reread it soon. Hopefully Chosenfire will finish it. :)

Speaking of finishing a story, I've finally finished mine!!! Alexander Harris Winchester is done!!!!! All I got to do is type it up and post it!! Yay!! It'll take me awhile to type it, cause I suck at typing, but hopefully it'll be up tommorrow. *crossing fingers*

How about you? How close are you to getting your next chapter up?
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 16 Later" from shdwslayer
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awesome last two pics. What image editing software are you using?
Comments from author:
Broderbund printshop deluxe version 22. Its fun and addicting. :) I haven't had it too long, just a few months. Since I like the pics that actually look like pics best, yours was the first I actually played with any effects.
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 14 Text Message From Hell" from shdwslayer
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I totally love the first one. That should be the header for the story. And btw, where did you find that picture of sam and dean? The one with the curtain.
Comments from author:
I like the first one best too! I didn't intend to do three, but I really liked that one with Willow. And since the third one I did was the one we liked best, it's a good thing I did.

I really don't remember where I found it. Most of the pictures I got from Supernatural TV, but I don't remember where I got that one. I think it was from a google search for Supernatural photos I did months ago, before I found Supernatural TV. I've been trying to remember so I can see if there's anything else on there, but no luck. :(
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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